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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from lindiel
Review:
Well, I hope this story has cleared up your writer's block. I like the direction it's going so far, my only hesitation is about Dolph. I really hope you'll write him more as the helpful father-figure he was in the earlier books than the condescending jerk he is in the later books. Judging by the end of Harlequin, there seems to be some hope that he'll be becoming less of an ass, so it would be great if that translated into this fic. I really hate ass-Dolph.
Review By [lindiel] • Date [9 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from littleoldme
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This is outright fabulous. While there are tons of AB crossovers out there, you've got some really unique touches with this one. I love that Dawn is Dolph's niece, and the way you've written her character is absolutely spot-on. Please update soon- I'm dying for more.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [9 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Alianna
Review:
Poor Dawn, *Sniff*
but it'll be interesting to read what happens, next
will the crew from LA come for the Nibblet and what happens when the masters meet?
Review By [Alianna] • Date [9 Jul 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from amusewithaview
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*rolls eyes* Why does it happen to the young ones? Cause the old ones cannot survive such drastic change. :P SHAND-DA! Whoot! Ok, SO looking forward to more, MUCh more!

^_^

Danke
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [9 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
Yay for new beginnings!

Dawn/Shang Da would be interesting. Getting around that kind of wolf/leopard polotics would be great to read.
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [8 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Tempe
Review:
Wow, Dolph is going to flip at Anita. Somehow. He always seems to find a reason. Anyway great chapter and I loved Simon and his heroic deeds. For someone who has writers block you have an amazing ability to write something I'd really like to read. So great work and I hope to see the next chapter out soon.
Review By [Tempe] • Date [8 Jul 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from NutsContract
Review:
Dawn and Asher! It should totally be Dawn/Asher... I love Ash, teehee! Update soon, please and thank you!
Review By [NutsContract] • Date [8 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WinterRayne
Review:
This is a great start. My vote is for Dawn/Shang-Da there are too few of these!!!
I think the only one I found was a ficlet in someone drabble list .
Review By [WinterRayne] • Date [8 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from amusewithaview
Review:
YAY! I love Dawn-centered and there's so little of it that has good romance too!

I vote for Dawn/Shang Da because it's very rarely done. Make that, NEVER done.

^_^

Danke
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [8 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Iriai
Review:
Nice. I wonder how Dolph will take it. Update soon!
Review By [Iriai] • Date [8 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from chajalive
Review:
I really like this chapter and it promises a fun story. I am also glad that you didn't spend endless pages on how the Scoobies didn't know about the outside world blahblahblah. The two universes don't fit perfectly together, but who cares. Dawn is in St Louis and now a were. Excitement! One little thing though, as far as I remember, only alphas can walk and talk after shifting back to human. So, not sure how Cherry manages it.
Chaja
Comments from author:
Thanks...i'm not sure what you mean about Cherry tho, she's not even in the chapter and I don't have any immediately shifting and speaking weres...sorry little bit confused here! I felt no need to waste pages of exposition on something that is easily explained, particularly since it makes more sense if you don't poke at it too much! thanks for the review, love xx Shezzi
Review By [chajalive] • Date [8 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Melli
Review:
This is a great start! Only the first chapter and you already have me hooked. :)

I love how you are writing Dawn, and the scene with Dolph blustering at Dawn's outfit was great. I am very curious to see how he is going to handle his own niece being something he hates. I also am very much looking forward to the future pairings/possible future pairings, particularly Dawn with the various vampires (though I adore the weres, as well). I wonder how Anita will feel about Dawn stealing some of 'her' men? That could get rather interesting. ;)

Anyway; enough of my awesome story-induced rambling. Please keep up the great work; I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
Review By [Melli] • Date [8 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Beth
Review:
I love it...looking forward to read the rest whenever you can upload the chapters...but there's no hurry...you take the time you need for it...
Review By [Beth] • Date [8 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from draconis
Review:
Good start.

Premise that the Hellmouth warped residents' understanding of all external reality is a good one. Could also argue that the same 'spell' or whatever, caused outsiders and outside law enforcement to think everything was ok in Sunnydale...that everyone was abiding by the national laws governing the preternatural.
Review By [draconis] • Date [8 Jul 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from serpentlady
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You've got a good start to a story filled with potential. I hope there is a fight scene and possibly a Dolph-reevaluates-his-views scene? Good luck, keep writing.
Review By [serpentlady] • Date [8 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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