Great chapter again. I love how you create the characters through their dialog and the thoughts of the Captain. Somehow I think that one or other, or perhaps all of the Captain's assumptions will fail to come true. It looks like Buffy is already becoming attached to Harraga, as he is to her. She will probably miss him if he is no longer around. I can just see her breaking out of the medical Center to find him :) So Well Done on finally finishing a story! Unfortunate that it is not the end of the series too, but I am not disappointed. I look forward avidly to the continuation of this series whenever you can bring to to us. How does tomorrow sound ;)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [7 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I'm loving this story, especially the frequent updates! I can't wait to find out if there will be a return of the Buffy persona, although I really enjoy the simplicity of the slayer. Please, please, please keep this going.
Review By [Tmwilliams] • Date [7 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I've been waiting YEARS for you to revive this one, as I've been a fan since the first chapter. Great initial hook, and good subsequent character development for the Klingons. When does Buffy get a batlev?
You know I'm a little surprised the Klingon doctor hasn't suggested rather than Buffy being an augment she's the last living member of a section of humanity who the augments were an artificial (and flawed) attempt to duplicate.
I wait for your updates with bated breath :) Loved this one as much as all the rest. If you ever write original stories professionally, please let us know cause I would buy your books in a heartbeat!! Thanks for the update!
Katt
Review By [Katt] • Date [7 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from karmasfriend
Review:
Awesome story!!! Really like it!!!
Review By [karmasfriend] • Date [7 Nov 12] • Not Rated
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