Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from normanK
What a wonderful story. I do hope the muse returns and allows you to finish this
Review By [normanK
] • Date [4 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from DieselDriver
Write some more of this story dammit!!! What's the deal with leaving it hanging??? You die or something?
Review By [DieselDriver
] • Date [26 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DieselDriver
This is a VERY GOOD start. I know it isn't finished but please write some more of it.
Review By [DieselDriver
] • Date [6 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Blackett
Any chance that talk with your muses and get back to this story? I would love to see more of it. It was a great start.
Review By [Blackett
] • Date [23 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from IcisofAvalon
You have a start on a great story here, my only complaint is that it seems as though you have abandoned the story. That really is too bad.
Review By [IcisofAvalon
] • Date [8 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Gideon
Cool Story. I like that you used an original character and Zabby is a great name. I hope you are able to continue this fic at some stage - I want to see more of her! Good to see that she is playing it smart and lying low until she heals.
Review By [Gideon
] • Date [5 Aug 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from harcroft
could get interesting, and how will the Council explain things? and how will it be dealt with? jack's going to want his daughter home, and Xander'll want to be with her ( unless it develops further into a Xander's real family thing, with it turning out that Xander really is Zabby's older brother... either that or Xander and Zabby getting re-assigned to Colorado Springs, with SG1 as backup when they are onworld, and the HST team while SG1 are offworld? ( come to think of it, it might be funny if he Council come up with a better cover story for the SGC as well)
Review By [harcroft
] • Date [9 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from AllenPitt
welcome back! So many questions--did the Asgard transporter remove the slayer-part from her? ie she no longer a slayer? Won't Xander & company kind of notice that she's missing? ie, Willow should be casting locator spells about now.. which could get interesting if they then invade SGC base...
* Nice use of transporter tech! Glad to see somebody in the SGC can think.. although it would have been funny if they'd found like 5 kids he didn't know he had or something.
So, she's destined to fight gods. No idea what that could mean .
One wonders if council records date back to ancient egypt & mention of 'demon gods'...
Review By [AllenPitt
] • Date [16 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Cristina
ah and here I thought that daddy Travers was bad his son was way worse.
I like Zabby very much.
Comments from author:
Thank you... and yes that does seem to be one evil Travers family.
Review By [Cristina
] • Date [27 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from limejuize
I really can't wait for more!! I usually hate oc, but I love Zabby. I can't wait untill Xander and Jack get to butt heads. Please update soon the waiting is killing me!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing. I'm sorry about the wait, but unfortunately nothing kills muses as effectively as real life. And to be honest I can't wait for Jack and Xander to butt heads either ;-)
Review By [limejuize
] • Date [16 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from SpacedCadet
I'm looking forward to more.
Review By [SpacedCadet
] • Date [24 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from mokahi
Great story. I love the character of Zabby. I particularly enjoy her interactions with Xander. You've created quite an interesting situation. I'm wondering how the Asgard glitch will affect Zabby. I'm really looking forward to Xander finding Zabby.
Review By [mokahi
] • Date [12 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from DeepBlueJoy
Since I'm not that fond of Buffy's real family stories, I was not sure about this. Now, however, you have my undivided attention.
Review By [DeepBlueJoy
] • Date [27 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Calen
Nice! Really enjoying this so far.;)
But I do want to see Xander kick ass, raid the SGC, have the Zabmeister knock tea'lc and jack out....:p or not. Whatever you do write more soon!
Review By [Calen
] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from imokit
This is a really good story!
Review By [imokit
] • Date [25 Sep 08] • Not Rated