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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from azulkan
Review:
Interesting start. Looking forward to more.
Review By [azulkan] • Date [11 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Jerri
Review:
Yes, you should keep writing. This is an interesting take on the situation.
Review By [Jerri] • Date [11 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AllenPitt
Review:
Keep on writing! One question that comes up is, why doesn't Buffy recall any of this? 1st grade means age 6... unless the council planted false memories? Maybe if so, the spell would start to break down after the end of s1, when she died briefly?
It'd be interesting if the kidnapper was Giles ...just to be different. Another question: Merrick comes up to her at Hemery High and says "you should have been contacted earlier" ie B. was never trained before she became the slayer. So...maybe one of the kidnappers had a change of heart and gave the child to the Summers' ? Something seems to have happened that caused her to be 'lost' until around age 15.
Hm...turning to Jack--he might ask the Asgard, they might be able to 'track' her using his DNA profile & 'lock on' to her....just a few ideas-
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [11 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Review:
Please continue. I'm not sure about the timeline, but are you making adjustments and if so when?

Please add a disclaimer as soon as possible. I would hate to see this blocked or removed.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [11 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Sweetdoggie
Review:
Definitely keep writing! I love Buffy/Stargate crossovers best of all! Intriguing premise. Looking forward to more soon.
Review By [Sweetdoggie] • Date [11 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Marcel
Review:
What kind of question is that? Of course you should keep writing :)

Great start - I haven't seen this idea before. A few typos (it's Goa'uld, for example) but nothing extreme. Definitely looking forward to what's coming next - and PLEASE keep writing long chapters.
Review By [Marcel] • Date [11 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TexasAries
Review:
Answer to your question. Yes you should continue the story.

What I like is the tight story line you have going in the chapter. Jack is acting like he should be and I like your orginal character. You make the reader care what is going on and that is a good way to start a story.

Well done.
Review By [TexasAries] • Date [11 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)vogonguard
Review:
This is good. Please don't make the girl Buffy: I don't think you are planning that but it would be a disappointment. Make her one of the mini-Slayers called after CHOSEN and that would be good. Looking forward to the collision between SG1 and the Council.
Review By [(Past Donor)vogonguard] • Date [11 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from arkeus
Review:
interesting, so this is a rather young buffy, maybe the end of the first season? that's a bit early for a cross, wonder what you have planned.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [11 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cristina
Review:
well this has potential.

:)
Review By [Cristina] • Date [11 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Wolflady
Review:
Whoa! Great start! I'm assuming it's Buffy, but if so, I am really curious how she didn't end up like a Counsil-raised Slayer like Kendra. If not, it will be just as fun when Jack finds out that this isn't the first (or last) child that this happened to.
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [11 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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