Another very good and interesting fic. I liked. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.

A cracking good story.

I just reread this entire series, and it is still one of my favorites. I hope you revisit this world soon as I miss your narrative voice in the CSI world.

Nicely done crossover, with good plot and some great bits of dialogue. I appreciated the slow reveal; well paced without being overly drawn-out for a big reveal at the very end, as so many others have done. I thought it was great that Dawn doesn't come across as a flat, whiny character, but instead takes an active and effective part in her own rescue.

OK, so I'm new to the site so I'm still trying to figure out out to navigate it. This is an awesome story and i can't wait to read what happens in the next story of the series.

Tremendous story! Absolutely enjoyed reading it a lot!!!

Awesome chapter! Ilove the scene between Catherine and Buffy! Can't wait for more!!!!

Awesome ending. Maybe Xander can stick around and land himself on of the hottie techies in the lab. That would make things interesting for everyone.

Very nice story, thanks!

OK, I see my earlier ch14 questions were answered. However, although you state Buffy still has Daniel's minions to clean-up, I think the more important question is what about his sire? Where/from whom did he learn magic? From whom did he learn about there being only 1 slayer at a time and why was the info out of date (e.g. was Daniel purposely kept ignorant by his sire for some even more nefarious reason)? After all, you did say,

"Someone had put it into this vampire’s head that he could take over this town, and Buffy was betting it wasn’t anyone around here. The vamps here keep their heads down so as not to ruin a good thing. And if Daniel’s sire had been a local, the sire would have dealt with his errant childe before things got this out of hand. Whoever had set this situation up had been looking to make trouble."

Looking forward to more.

"Nosfernotu" LOL. That's priceless, and very 'Scooby'-ish.

Definitely looking forward to reading the rest of this story and the series. I'm sure it will be soon explained in the story, but I'm quite curious as to how Daniel caught Dawn between their "eye-lock" and her leaving the Casino. However, I'm surprised you didn't have Dawn just IMMEDIATELY call Buffy or Sam from where she was in the Casino, surrounded by people and almost 100% certainly in view of the security cams. Why she would think she has to wait until she was 'outside in the sun' seems completely out of character for Dawn's intelligence.

thank you for a wonderful read.

good ending. Only one thing Xander a good judge off characters. Never saw that but that's me.

really a good story, good writing.

A fitting end. I look forward to the continuation of the sequels, and to the showing of the video at every family get together...

Very nice job on the last chapter, wish there was a little more Willow nd Xander though.

Great chapter. Wonderful ending to this story, and Warrick's reaction to Nick's cluelessness was just... Yeah. Thanks for sharing!