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The Witch and The Warrior

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Review of chapter "An Uncomfortable Revelation" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good storytelling. Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
Thanks. And thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it.

Favid
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [16 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An Uncomfortable Revelation" from winddrinker
Review:
i like where this seems to be going, it's interesting. i wish the chapters were longer, but then you update often enough that it's not a big issue. you keep writing and i'll definitely keep reading. thanks.
Comments from author:
I thank you.
I've often been told my chapters are too short and too abrupt, but I don't believe in padding my chapters, or my stories. I like to write what I think is needed for the chapter, and then move along to the next one. I think it keeps the story moving along without getting boring (I hope, anyway).
I appreciate the comments.

David
Review By [winddrinker] • Date [15 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An Uncomfortable Revelation" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Morgar" from CPTSkip
Review:
You are building a nice ominous atmosphere with your story. I like your story and look forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I appreciate the review. More is coming, for sure.
David
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Morgar" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I'm enjoying your story so far.
Comments from author:
I'm glad. Me too.

David
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Amazon Camp" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Hopefully, when you get more into the story, it will be HOT! and worth your time.

David
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [13 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Amazon Camp" from CPTSkip
Review:
I like a good Xena/Gabrielle story and this one looks like it just might be a good one. Lol! I like how you have started your story and the way you are portraying Xena. I look forward to the cross beginning and seeeing how Willow and Gabrielle fit into each other's worlds. More, please?
Comments from author:
I appreciate the words of encouragement.
For some reason, I just like Xena / Buffy stories.
More on the way.

David
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [12 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Amazon Camp" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Very interesting story you have here, can't wait to see where you go with it.

Wispr
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading. Hope you aren't disappointed where it ends up.

David
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [12 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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