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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Coralskipper
Review:
Another good chapter. Shame no one got adequately threatened though, hehehe.
Review By [Coralskipper] • Date [13 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from grundy
Review:
Yay for Anya and her honesty! (And I love that she was researching schools to do the best job she could of taking care of Dawn.) Can't wait to see how Dawn will take to Xavier's School.
Review By [grundy] • Date [13 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
Excellent way to cross the two 'verses. Making Joyce the 'bad guy' is a twist and it works. Hope we see more soon!
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [13 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
Loved the new chapter.....
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [13 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from JarodsSlayer
Review:
I adore the update. Two thumbs up!
Review By [JarodsSlayer] • Date [13 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from netty
Review:
I love this story so far! Please, continue!
Review By [netty] • Date [13 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AllenPitt
Review:
Neat. And Dawn did raise an interesting point, she might be a mutant herself. Though that would get tied in with the whole "Key" thing also, huge source of energy inside her. She's around 14/15 at this point, so she might be about to 'manifest'. Trying to think if any X-Man would qualify as a "seer" (since they + insane people can 'see' her as a ball of glowing energy). Scott probably has weird vision what with the eyebeams/visor?
And I bet Spike will haunt the vicinity of the school-he promised Buffy to protect Dawn and doesn't much like the scoobies anyway (so why hang around them) ...
Comments from author:
Oh yes, Spike will be around, the only reason he isn't there at the moment is because it is daytime ... it should be fun.

As for the mutant thing, yes, she'll be manifesting soon. As for Scotty, I never really thought about it. Something for me to dwell on.
- D
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [13 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Readerwriter
Review:
I adore it!
Anya is so sweet, I think she's one of those characters we frequently misunderstand some of the quirks of, and I think you've captured it perfectly (to me at least) that there are explanations to some of those quirks!
And I love that Hank isn't so big n nasty.
Plus blue fur, way cute!
Anyways, keep em coming! =P
Sophx
Review By [Readerwriter] • Date [13 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ChaoticTempest
Review:
This is a good start! I can't wait to see where this goes, it has allot of potential ;)
~Chaotic~
Review By [ChaoticTempest] • Date [27 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MercyJones
Review:
Interesting. Can't wait to see where you take this.
Review By [MercyJones] • Date [16 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragonelf
Review:
I didn't know that Einstein was one of your heroes, anyway I am
glad you liked the quote I used.

I have just started to end all my comments with a quote of some
kind. You could say it is a newly formed habit of mine, anyway
there will be more quotes and some of them might even be Albert
Einstein ones.

By the way, I got more Einstein quotes in my blog in which I store
my quote collection and you can find it by visiting my profile.

::Feeds the plot bunny::


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Imagination is more important than knowledge, for knowledge
is limited while imagination embraces the entire world.
- Albert Einstein
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [12 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from willowbee
Review:
Very interesting premise. It's really too soon in the story to say much more than that.
Review By [willowbee] • Date [9 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Coldhands
Review:
Really like the concept. I thought the challenge was an interesting one too.

I liked the way Hank found out about Joyce and Buffy, though I do think it should be fleshed-out. There's so much potential there for reasoning and Dawn's family obligations and all of that, I'd like to read more. It just feels like the chapter is missing something.

The ending was what I felt broke my suspension of disbelief. Hank rocking a twelve-year-old Dawn I can imagine, but a fifteen-year-old? She's a little old for that, even if she's sad and traumatized, not enough build-up and explanation of her emotions for me to believe it. I know, it's an incredibly tiny detail, but it bothers me.
Comments from author:
I'm sorry it bothers you. I was already planning to change her age to 14 but I'm not going lower than that. As for the sad and traumatized, I didn't flesh anything about her because she is numb. At least that's what I tried (and failed) to do. As I've said to a few others, I will go back and flesh it out, I'm working on it now actually, but I honestly wrote that chapter in about twenty minutes while on lunch at work, so it's got few kinks I'm trying to straighten out.
- D
Review By [Coldhands] • Date [25 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragonelf
Review:
This is a different spin on the missing father scenario and I am already looking forward to see where you will take this story.

::Feeds the plot bunny and gives the muse a Galactus sized jar of encouragement cookies::


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"To raise new questions, new possibilities,
to regard old problems from a new angle,
requires creative imagination and marks
real advance in science."
- Albert Einstein
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Comments from author:
I honestly don't know how to respond to that. Einstein is one of my heroes, and that you used a quote from him to compliment me .... it makes me feel something beyond words.
- D
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [25 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from megan
Review:
I love your story I love to read stories were Hank is not the bad guy and wish there were more like this. Will they still bring Buffy back from the dead and if so will she stay in Sunnydale or go with Dawn?
Comments from author:
Yes to the first, I don't know about the second ... something to think on. Though it wont be for at least a few chapters because B wasn't resurrected until a few months after she died. I don't remember from the show, I should go watch ...
- D
Review By [megan] • Date [25 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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