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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Crayshack
Review:
I like the way you contrast the innocence of the traditional Scoobies with the more hardcore aspects of the characters you've developed. I love the whole series, keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
You've got to feel sorry for the poor naive slayers of Season 8 being introduced to their alternate numbers from the Compelled 'Verse :-p
Review By [Crayshack] • Date [27 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AbscondingCascade
Review:
Great chapter, can't wait for chapter 2
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review :-)
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [27 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)kaela
Review:
This is very promising. I look forward to exciting violance and lots of doppleganger fun.
Comments from author:
Hope I don't disappoint with the violence then ;-)
Review By [(Recent Donor)kaela] • Date [27 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Cool. Hmm, tried to use my search-fu to see if there was a specific type of bow that, when scaled up, could take giant-Dawn's size into context and be pretty bad ass... didn't find much though :/

And So Commence The Wars!
Comments from author:
Well she could use a Roman Ballista like a pistol-crossbow but using a telegraph pole as a club might be easier :-p
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [26 Jul 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DHX
Review:
cool. whats the E.T.A for the next chapter as I'm already suffering from withdrawals.
Comments from author:
Weekend after next, I'm going to alternate writing chapters for Compelled and XSGCOM for a while.
Review By [DHX] • Date [26 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from rbj
Review:
Thanks for the continuation. It is nice to see that Buffy can't see past her own ego in every dimension.
Comments from author:
Buffy is too used to winning, even if it's only by sheer luck or a series of deus ex machina. She just needs a taste of reality sometimes ;-)
Review By [rbj] • Date [26 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Sandi
Review:
This is so cool. I'm playing in a multidimensional world myself and it's always fun to shake things up. What can XXL Dawn do? She has to have something special to go with the height. Maybe that old one that is wandering around this site. See if you can get cleared to use Oriens. I'd like to see her too.
Comments from author:
>What can XXL Dawn do?

She's the right size to deal with the demon insects in the classic way... stamp, stamp ;-)

>See if you can get cleared to use Oriens. I'd like to see her too.

Maybe in the spin-off I'm planning after the main Compelled storyline is complete.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [26 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Inquisitor
Review:
cool...it's full scale war, too bad they're a bit late...Buffy Season8 is going to get a harsh wake up call from being medieval to modern combat...was wondering if they'd stumble into a Xander that dressed up as a Saiyan like in the Buffy Z fanfic series...honestly one of the major deviation in the timeline is Xander's halloween costume...if Xander is a half Saiyan, he'd start blowing up planets just to clean up Jasmine&the First Evil's forces...anyway since they're now employing technology, I was hoping that they start using Sabre or Devastator Cylcones from Robotec/Mospeada...the Slayers are strong enough to wear a heavy armour...what about the BTVS/SG1 xovers...they could really use the tech from there..
Comments from author:
No crossovers in the main Compelled storyline I'm afraid, although when I'm finished with story 5 I'm actively considering a follow-on "Compelled: Pathfinder Chronicles" which would have Dawn and other characters from the Fic jumping dimensions.
Review By [Inquisitor] • Date [26 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mymatedave
Review:
Really liking this. Look forward to the next chapter with baited breath.
Comments from author:
It'll be a chapter every other week while I work on my XSGCOM crossover too.
Review By [mymatedave] • Date [26 Jul 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jaycatt
Review:
Woo-hoo, more *Compelled*! I love this tale. And I particularly like that you've brought the canon Buffyverse back into the mix, even if just for a chapter or two. It felt a bit strange, actually, seeing our familiar characters as, well, strangers to Compelled Connor and Dawn. Odd, too, to see a Buffyverse without all of your richly-formed OCs, even if it's the "real" Buffyverse.

Might there be possibilities in gallons of MegaDawn's blood? Or will magical strength also fail to increase proportionally?

Eager to see what you put out next. Thank you for writing!
Comments from author:
Crossing Compelled with a universe that's much closer to the Joss version gives me a chance to highlight just how diverged they are now. The Season 8 Comics aren't the "real" universe by the way, that's why the continuity with TV series isn't what it should be :-p

>Or will magical strength also fail to increase proportionally?

That's how I'm playing it with the power diluted by the sheer volume, you could use Dawnzilla's less concentrated blood as low octane portal-fuel though ;-)
Review By [jaycatt] • Date [26 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Marcel
Review:
Yay... you don't kid around, do you :P Great start, looking forward to the bloody second chapter.

One thing though: I think the beginning is a little unlikely; the puns are rather thick. I just can't see two teenagers using the word "thermodynamics" :)
Comments from author:
Dawn and Connor have been living in a hotel with Fred for quite a while now and Dawn in particular has been spending a fair deal of time in the Lab as they work on Portal tracking technology. I figured Fred's geeky humour would have rubbed off to some extent... character development no less! :-p
Review By [Marcel] • Date [26 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Damn that was an awesome beginning chapter, can't wait for the update!

Wispr
Comments from author:
I've decided to alternate writing chapters of XSGCOM and Compelled so it'll be the weekend after next for chapter two.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [26 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RabidReject
Review:
Awesome!! I've been waiting and waiting for this to come back.. and you didn't disapoint. Absolutely amazing! I can't wait to see the battle.
Comments from author:
Well I'm glad you think it was worth the wait!
Review By [RabidReject] • Date [26 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from arkeus
Review:
hehe.

Excellent beginning, indeed.

Me say Willow should Turn the Ground around the castle into a quicsand. Shouldn't be too hard, and it would be of great help for making targets :D
Comments from author:
The Willow's (plural) will be showing Jasmine's Army a thing or two about magic!
Review By [arkeus] • Date [26 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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