Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Katt
I just re-read this series... AGAIN! =p Please please don't abandon this. It is def one of the best time travel/alt universe best stories I have read.
Review By [Katt
] • Date [25 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from maxthehobbit
I realize that stories that haven't been updated for over 2 years are never finished in most cases. From experience I know that sometimes you just get tired of the same old thing and you get ideas while writing that just don't fit in the story, so you end up at least starting other stories. I see you still update other stories so maybe there is still hope for this series to continue.
I've read the whole series these last few days and enjoyed every minute of it. Thanks for posting it.
Review By [maxthehobbit
] • Date [15 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from lunalurker
Still plowing through, and loving, this series! It saddens and worries me how long it has been without an update though. Please come back and finish your stories, we implore you!
I wish you and yours and your muses good fortune, and thanks for writing!
Review By [lunalurker
] • Date [3 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from leelaa
Any chance of an update this month please? Or maybe next month?
Review By [leelaa
] • Date [17 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from YademosEbyam
I like this series a lot! So much so I'm re-reading it from the beginning for the *third* time! (BtVS a'la John Ringo: Are the Gunslayers going to go after some P'Osleen demons? ;)) Whenever I read the the battle scenes, I hear "March of Cambreath" by Heather Alexander (see http://baencd.thefifthimperium.com/11-UntotheBreachCD/UntotheBreachCD/Heather_Alexander.htm
for the lyrics and MP3) playing in to background. Wouldn't it make a great anthem for the PDF? *"How Many Of Them Can We Make Die!"*
Review By [YademosEbyam
] • Date [24 Nov 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from cptquinn
This series is amazing, Please continue this soon.
Review By [cptquinn
] • Date [18 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Traveler
I enjoyed this entire series and have recommended every story. I hope you plan to continue the series. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [Traveler
] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from Prometeus
Hmm, they're on an alternate earth beating up on the local First Evil which might have the bright idea of taking the demon scythe and leaving. And since they know the First Evil in their reality fled, maybe the Slayers could locate this alternate reality's demon scythe and present it to Illyria? Probably not as good as her sword but honestly they really should keep track of those things. Assuming they know about them. They do know that the First was looking for something before he hightailed it.
Review By [Prometeus
] • Date [23 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from sdavidm
This series is excellent. I hope you continue it!
Review By [sdavidm
] • Date [31 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from IncendiaryDevice
I've spent the last few days reading the compelled series and to be honest I have to say that it is one of the better stories that I've come across in a long time.
I like how you've decided to have a story that covers the events of not just a single AU but multiple universes that interact and intermingle.
Your OC's are also some of the most well written that I've come across and they mostly blend well with the main cast.
I hope you choose to continue this great story.
Review By [IncendiaryDevice
] • Date [28 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from endeni
Hi, I really enjoyed this series. What a gripping and imaginative joy-raid! :)
I loved the parallelisms with the Arthurian Legends and the ones with the Cold War (according to which Pylea is... Korea? ^^).
I’m also particularly fond of your explanation for how Illyria came to repossess her power during the original time-line and I found the slayers’ employment of machinery intriguing.
Lastly, while I have some issues with Wesley’s characterization (a little bit more unstable and amoral for my comfort), I loved what you have done with Illyria.
I read somewhere* that one of the things that make her character so intriguing is the fact that she possesses “agency” and, boy, does she show it in your story! ^^
* Oh, here’s the link, amazing essay: http://community.livejournal.com/idol_reflection/6272.html
Review By [endeni
] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Ansku
Brilliant as always :)
Review By [Ansku
] • Date [11 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from nemogbr
I've been reading the series for the last few days and realised, I should have taken my time.
Scotland – Alternate Earth AE2005-0004-B (Pathfinder Index Code) – July 2005
I can see Willow starting to create her more scythes for her team with the assistance of the Devon Coven. Perhaps a telepathic call to more Slayers?
Alternate Earth AE2005-0098-A (Pathfinder Index Code) – November 2005
The new Earth seems to be very different to the original setting, would the Bringers have been able to kill all the potentials? After opening the Hellmouth, the First would have believed the Slayer to be a minor threat. Willow would be able to activate the rest with perhaps a telepathic call to come to the Hyperion.
Tara should definitely end up in a relationship with both Witches. I see a closer association with this Earth.
I hope they rescue Xander soon and he could be more willing to ensure the new Slayers know about firearms.
Good way to make Buffy more reliant on herself and start learning something. She seems to be reacting more than being proactive. After all the data from the future she still hesitates.
Hope she starts learning some lessons from her previous mistakes. She makes too many in Whedonverse, just too heroic and not enough strategy.
Review By [nemogbr
] • Date [5 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from buffyrazz
had me a thought about the Dark Scythe, firsty used the Scourge guy to pluck it cause it needed to be a pure demon, no humanity - so no to bringers, no to vamps. What about a human shaped old one?
Scary thought - Berith gets his mitts on it.
Scariest thought 4 Firsty: Ilyria gets her hand on it.. ruh oh.. Momma and Spawn/daughter Slayer Scythe, Dark Scythe, Corporeal chunks of Firsty time!!
Love the series, the logical escalation in arms etc is brilliant. The humour and digs/nods to Canon are hilarious.
Hope to see an update in near future, as i've just re-read it all for bout the 6th time.
Review By [buffyrazz
] • Date [21 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Caminus
Any chance of a S8-esque Super!Buffy making a game saving (or breaking) appearance on the back 16 of this one? I think Illyria might get power-envy. :P
Review By [Caminus
] • Date [9 Feb 10] • Not Rated