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Review of chapter "Chapter One—Little Lost Slayer, Found" from (Past Donor)mpop
Review:
Very interesting story-idea. Since Buffy is not the slayer yet does that mean she's not in highschool yet and will go to school with Wilow, Xander and Jessie at an earlier grade?
Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. She's heading to high school in Sunnydale in ten weeks from the story's beginning. That gives Giles 6 weeks to get her ready, since she needed to heal after being rescued. So that puts her into Sunnydale high at the beginning of her sophomore year. More coming soonish. 8)
Review By [(Past Donor)mpop] • Date [4 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Little Lost Slayer, Found" from war
Review:
interesting start looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Should have some more soonish.... 8)
Review By [war] • Date [4 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Little Lost Slayer, Found" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
excellent start! looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I'll try to update soon. 8)
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [4 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Little Lost Slayer, Found" from Wolflady
Review:
Great start! I can't wait to see what comes next.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. More coming soonish. 8)
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [4 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Little Lost Slayer, Found" from Tempi
Review:
Interesting start. I look forward to reading more.

Since "normal" canon Buffy was tiny at 160 cm, this version of her at less than 150 cm would be a midget. I hope she won't meet too many insensitive people in school, because it sounds like she is more the cold-blooded killer type than the sunny cheerleader. Those insensitive people could end up beaten or worse...

What age is Buffy currently?
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. She's 150 now, and she might grow a little. She's only 15 after all. This story starts place right at the beginning of Summer, ten weeks before Buffy's sophomore year.

Unfortunately, you're right. She'll have to reign in the killer instinct. She's probably actively dangerous to anyone who attacks her, even verbally. We'll have to wait and see how meeting Cordy goes...
Review By [Tempi] • Date [4 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Little Lost Slayer, Found" from AllenPitt
Review:
Well, Angel isn't going to be able to be her pal let alone boyfriend, that's for sure, probably hates vampires with an unholy passion. Poor Angel: stuck in Sunnydale on a mission from Whistler to help her... then again it might work as a partnership or as a "sometimes he helps them" sort of deal.
Scars--I guess cheerleading is out. Ouch. Even as is, in gym class, she'll need some lame explanation as to how she got them. But hey: no bad rep from burning down gyms.....
And even better, lots of training pre-slayer, so when she finally becomes the slayer, should be much more effective right off...
She'll have to work hard learning to socialize with people again, and I doubt she'll pass Cordelia's little 'test' (coolness quiz in first ep). Oh well!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Buffy's not going to be vamp-friendly. You're right about that. Angel needs to be careful not to get staked.

Scars. Yep. Got a lot of them, so short skirt Buffy is on hiatus.

Buffy doesn't have any bad rep, you're right about that. As a matter of fact, she has not reputation at all, not having been in school for three years.

She's one hell of a fighter and used to training when injured, no matter the pain.

Bufy won't pass Cordy's test. She also won't respond well to a Cordy attack, ifyou know what I mean... 8)
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [4 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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