This is great, your misguided Willow is characterized like the Willow of cannon, and is not just an evil woman out to destroy things. I loved Xander's voice in this, I can't wait to see more of this fic.
The first chapter really pique my interest. I like how you portray Buffy and her inner monologue is amusing. My favourite one is about the book natural place in the universe is on the floor. Please continue.