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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from JaredDrake
Review:
Well, I hate Sora now. That's for sure. But I do understand where she's coming from. The lesser of two evils I suppose. I'm interested in reading what happens next! Although the prospect of reading anything connected with slash doesn't inspire enthusiasm in me... (Who will be involved in it anyway? John? Rodney? Xander?) I'm not homophobic, one of my best friends is gay. I just don't like reading it.
Comments from author:
No no, it's alright, I get it. I used to be like that before and, honestly, I'm still a little like that about femmeslash too. It does involve Xander and it does involve Rodney, but not John. John's too straight in the canon, I think, but Rodney and Xander have had moments of sexual ambiguity.
I know it probably disappoints you and, honestly, I think you should avoid the next story if you don't like slash. The slash is a sidpoint of the story, not a driving point of the plot, but it's still apparent and it's not hiding.
Thanks for reading and reviewing this story.
Review By [JaredDrake] • Date [9 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from manic
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Yes! Our first concrete connection to Atlantis. What a great way to end this story. I greatly look forward to the next installment. Thanks again for sharing with us.
Review By [manic] • Date [9 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from manic
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Holy Crap. THat was horrible. So tragic. I wonder what Xander's next step will be. He has to have a way to hunt. THanks for the update.
Review By [manic] • Date [9 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from Rivana
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I was not supposed to spend the whole evening reading, but there you go. Brilliant story so far, really involved and well executed. Can't wait to see what happens next, Super!Xan is a treasured kink of mine. :-)
Review By [Rivana] • Date [8 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from zeppelinrules
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this is such a wonderful story, ive jusst read it and the prequel straight through and i am spellbound. I cannot wait until the next chapter and the one after that and the one after that etc. etc. I especially liked chapter 13 and xanders view on his captivity it was amazing, did \you make that up yourself or did you adapt it from somewhere else, if so where?
can't wait for this to continue. love your work
Erin
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading this.
As far as chapter 13 is concerned (I had to go back to see what you were talking about), I can't say that it wasn't inspired by outside works (because my interest in writing fanfiction was inspired mainly by fanfiction) and, if it was, I don't know the works. All I tried to do was imagine myself in Xander's shoes and not only how frustrated I would feel, but how Xander would attempt to explain it to someone who doesn't understand him.
If it was adapted from something else... maybe? I've really read too many books and too much fanfiction to be able to judge this fairly. Sorry!
I'm pretty sure, though, any story with a character in a similiar situation as Xander would, at some point, have to reflect on what happened in a similiar way. It's my own words and my own expression but the general nature of reflection itself is, by far, not original at all.
Review By [zeppelinrules] • Date [7 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from grd
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With all the misery, pain, loss, and now betrayal, how will you ever recover any sense of good? Will Xan become a hollow monster now, like Sora feared or what? Doom and gloom, making it hard to see any hope. Will Xan find away to payback the Wraith for what they did to him or is he the universe's butt monkey? Hell dimension, yup, thats what Xan's best friend sent him too for sure.
Review By [grd] • Date [6 Nov 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from RevDorothyL
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Aagh! Sora, how could you?

Intriguing and gripping chapters, as usual!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [6 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from mithrilandtj
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Damn. I guess Genii never change after all.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [6 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from Tempe
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Okay that was evil. I guess it's a good thing that I can't stand Sora since she was planning to kill everyone off in the first place. Now all I need to know is what did he just catch. Please? Just a little hint? Well, if you can't tell me then I'm just going to have to beg for another update today! Please update! Great work again, and really I can't wait to see what happens next.
Review By [Tempe] • Date [6 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from manic
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Holy crap, Sora!! Her reasoning makes a sick kind of sense... I really thought she was free from Koyla.

What a cliffhanger! I can't wait to see what happens. Thanks so much for the updates.
Review By [manic] • Date [6 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from manic
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I'm concerned. Why did Sora interrupt Xander just to ask him that question? I'm dying here, waiting for the other shoe to drop :)
Review By [manic] • Date [6 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from tals
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Wow! I did not se that coming at all. Sora is so utterly messed up inside, it almost makes me feel for her. I love how you keep balancing Xander between his jovial, carefree persona, and the deeper, darker memories. Lovely work as always.

Tals
Review By [tals] • Date [6 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from NaiveGhost
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Okay, I so didn't see that coming. Although I knew Sora had to be "up to something".
Anyway great chapter(s)! Keep writing!
;-)
Review By [NaiveGhost] • Date [6 Nov 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from AllenPitt
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gee, resocializing after this might be a bit harder. The funny thing is, he's from earth, I bet her people would have loved to get hold of him as a way to get at Atlantis....
Have to wonder how things went on earth without him around. s3 might have ended the same way, he didn't have a huge effect there. Later seasons, it'd get weirder. People would be blaming Willow for a long time, she'd be blaming herself (over Oz, too).. odds are they'd find it a lot tougher to work with Faith later on, too...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [6 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from Guardian
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Nice update, was great to get two new chapters at once :)
So far I've liked the fic very much, definitely up there with "Father Goose..." and other top stories. Hope you find more time to write and update :P
Xander just can't find a nice, GOOD girl, can he? Always attracted to the evil, poor guy.
Review By [Guardian] • Date [6 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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