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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from junnights
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Hi!
You know, this is one of my absolute favourites now:) so I really hope for a new chapter soon. Though I guess you might be stuck or something since it has taken so long... The 'only' (you're the author:) - only way I can see) way for Xander to meet with the Atlantis team is if they'd register the ancient activation Xander did and came... or just randomly checked that planet out (should be in the database). Or maybe Sora takes Xander back with her to the Genii...
If they come you can make a point og trading the tech for weapons or something...
well... I hope this sparks some ideas:)

me
Review By [junnights] • Date [5 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from inarae
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Wow. How did I miss finding this fic? I am very impressed. You have a great handle on dramatic tension. I can't wait to read more--I especially can't wait for Xandman to learn that the Atlantians are from Earth! Thanks for writing and sharing. I'll be checking back regularly.
Review By [inarae] • Date [24 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from RevDorothyL
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Thanks for another fine chapter! Xander and Sora actually seem to be getting to know one another, finally, and it's nice to see (even if -- with Xander's luck -- the relatively peaceful interlude probably won't last long).
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [18 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cdog
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Interesting story, interesting concept, and pretty entertaining. At least the series was until you mentioned that it's gonna be slash (talk about a major car pile-up). I didn't even read the first chapter of this because really there's no point because I'm not gonna read the rest of it. Like my friend Gin Rummy use to say "I don't do diplomacy" well I like to say "I don't do slash". Good writing and decent length chapters so kudos. But next time mark it properly even if the material isn't in it yet. It would have saved me the time and disappoint me to get into the story and then come to find out I just wasted my energy because I'm not going to ever finish it.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [14 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from wickedfire
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Good good, very interesting so far. I'm looking forward to his meeting with team atlantis.
Review By [wickedfire] • Date [13 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from mithrilandtj
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So... when is Xan gonna run into the Atlantis crowd?
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [13 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from AllenPitt
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Things are going too well for him, that means something bad will happen soon. Poor Xander. 18 and he has a bad knee. Those things don't improve with time, they just get worse....
and it's too bad Earth doesn't have a stargate. Heh. Of course even knowing the coordinates wouldn't help, it's too far away to reach without a huge power source backing it...
It's weird to think of the scoobies without Xander, the heart of the team... maybe they brought someone else in for same role, like Jonathan or somebody...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [13 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from manic
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Again, thank you so much for giving us Sora. I continue to enjoy their interactions.
Review By [manic] • Date [13 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from prehensileclaw
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Nice twist on Sora... Maybe I should have caught that before now.. The story keeps on getting better. Thanks for writing =)
Review By [prehensileclaw] • Date [10 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from RevDorothyL
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Loved this bit, especially: "He was quite ready and willing to share his pain with the rest of the world. Didn’t kindergarten teach you that sharing is caring?"

And I'm embarrassed to admit I'd forgotten the name of that Geni woman who'd been so pig-headedly determined to kill Teyla in revenge for a wrong Teyla never did, and who'd totally bought into her leader's bull about the people of Atlantis being their enemies and the city rightfully theirs to take by force, no matter who else had to suffer. I can see her turning her pigheadedness on herself and exiling herself to this planet, where she simultaneously seeks to help but also lacks almost all empathy for the people around her.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [9 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from slightlyeccentric
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I am so very in love with this story, I was so excited to hear Sora's back story. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Review By [slightlyeccentric] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from JaredDrake
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Yay! New chapter! Hmmm...just saw a picture of Sora on wikipedia. Any chance you'll abandon any slash pairings for Xander? hehe
Review By [JaredDrake] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Tempe
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What things were real? Evil cliffhanger. Maybe it was the animal pack? I have to admit, I REALLY dislike Sora. And although I know it's really cliche, I have to hope that Xander will make it to Atlantis soon enough. Of course, would they want him if they learned what he had to do to survive? This story is very creative and I loved the whole idea of the Keep and the rules inside. A little bit Gladiator maybe, but the Wraith certainly are ruthless enough to do such a thing. It's no worse then what we've done as a planet. Great work, and I look forward to your next entry.
Review By [Tempe] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from AllenPitt
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Oops, another chance to realize Atlantis might be a way home missed. Too bad she didn't give more info on Atlantis, he might have picked up on something that indicated where they're from. Maybe someday.
Nice tie-in with Atlantis using her by the way----
He really needs to find an Ancient outpost packed full of super weapons, but it's very unlikely--if they'd had them, they would have used them during their long war with the Wraith, after all...
Though I suppose a ZPM factory might not be too much to hope for. They had to make them somewhere, after all. Imagine an Atlantis that was actually at full power....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from manic
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Yay! It is our Sora! Thank you for including her in the fic. I'm a little iffy on Xander's portrayal in these later chapters. It is definetly different that before. I know this experience is completely different than with the Wraith, so I don't expect him to act the same. I just, for some reason, feel that he's almost back to where he was before the Keep.

Thanks for the update! I look forward to more. Oh, and I love Xander's "holy crap" moment at the end ;)
Review By [manic] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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