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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Fionfee
Review:
Sounds good so far, I can't wait to read how you get them to interact for longer than a few minutes though :)
Review By [Fionfee] • Date [16 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from jakerawley
Review:
I'm looking forward to more Teal'c/Cordelia interaction. What a fun pairing to write! There isn't enough Cordelia fic out there in my opinion. I thought the first two chapters were a little heavy on the exposition, but this chapter felt like the story was taking off. Post again soon, please.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked this chapter. I did have to do a lot of explaining for why Cordelia had to move to Colorado Springs as well as extra details I wanted in chapters 1-2. I wanted the story to be set up for the most part right off, no flashbacks this way. Any extra details will show up in much shorter detail from now on.
Review By [jakerawley] • Date [16 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Current Donor)Tempi
Review:
Interesting beginning. I look forward to reading more about Cordelia and Teal'c.
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [16 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Past Donor)phyllismski
Review:
this has been great fun already, the combinations of legends of all kinds...mixing the Gate with Cordelia is just grand because her and Teal'c, just perfect and as I really like Illyria(and hope to see her again), I like that Cindy is her daughter and mother of the Slayers. kick ass

please continue this very fresh story!!!!!


Phyllis
Review By [(Past Donor)phyllismski] • Date [15 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from MatthewC
Review:
Good premise. But how can a ghost and a magical amulet work in the non-magic area?
Comments from author:
I'm glad you asked. The ghost thing will be explained in chapter 3 and whenever the magical amulet appears I'll explain it then. But I do know why they work.
Review By [MatthewC] • Date [15 Aug 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Current Donor)kcl
Review:
I like how you're tying in bits and snippets of so many other fandoms. Do you plan on expanding any of them?

Aside from that, this is a very interesting premise and I look forward to seeing where you take it. Thanks!
Comments from author:
I'm only really planning to mention several other fandoms, I'm not planning to make this a multiple crossings fic. ^-^ I hope you enjoy where I'm taking it.
Review By [(Current Donor)kcl] • Date [14 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from PATM
Review:
Illyria sounds better and a God King having a daughter? Wild! Thanks. Since Cindy took
over a body am I to understand the body would be human and the green blood the
transplanted demon soul changing the body?
Comments from author:
Sorry about that, fixed the name ^-^ Why couldn't Illyria be a mother? ^-^ I meant to explain the blood comment in the chapter but somehow missed it, I'll try to work it into chapter 3.
Review By [PATM] • Date [14 Aug 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from enderverse
Review:
I'm just picturing Illyria trying to force all of the slayers to call her Grandma. The Vampire Demon and the Slayer Demon being related that makes sense though. They both inhabit human bodies just one inhabits dead bodies and one inhabits living bodies.
Review By [enderverse] • Date [14 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from darren
Review:
I think you've misnamed Cindy. You should have called her after her two grandmothers: Mary and Sue.
Comments from author:
Hehe. Yeah I suppose she is like a Mary Sue character. I needed someone to tell Cordelia to move to Colorado Springs and it suited my story to have her know everything, I just needed to give her a reason why she knows everything. Though I think she got a lot of background so she could just be an original character. Her name, by the way, came from Sinny (what I was planning to call her originally) which in turn came from Sineya, the first slayer.
Review By [darren] • Date [14 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Fighter
Review:
Great chapter. I like all that information that it gave. I can't wait for Cordelia and Teal’c to meet. Please come back soon.
Review By [Fighter] • Date [14 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I'm enjoying this set-up, but by "Illiya" did you mean "ILLYRIA" (the Old One who took over Fred's body as her new shell in season 5 of 'Angel')?
Comments from author:
Yep yep! Sorry about that, I've fixed it.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [14 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WolfWriter
Review:
Uh, just WHO is Cindy, really?

40 feet tall and green?

She's not Cthulu, is she?
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [14 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Eh. Just okay so far.

Heavenmouth? Awesome :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [14 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mackon
Review:
Cool.

Thanks for sharing
Review By [Mackon] • Date [14 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from helnara
Review:
omg thanks for picking my challenge cant wait to read more
Comments from author:
YAY! I hope you like it. I was looking through a ton of challenges and saving the ones I thought I might be able to write and then I was going to randomly select one and attempt to write it. As soon as I saw yours I got the idea in my head with Cordelia going to Colorado Springs so I went with it. I've got my ideas for the next couple of chapters of how they meet and become friends, but I'm still not sure of the overall plot.
Review By [helnara] • Date [14 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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