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A New Friend for Teal'c

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Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from Damia
Review:
I think your portrayal of Teal'c is spot on. He speaks more than a lot of authors like to admit, just as Oz does. As a fan and avid watcher of both shows I've noticed that when they need to get a point across or they feel something is going wrong or they just feel strongly about something they can be quite vocal. If anyone argues I'll gladly quote a few episodes. Keep up the good work and stop leaving me at the edge of my seat.
- D
Comments from author:
Thanks! I think my Teal'c is becoming a little more talkative thanks to Cordy. I can only think of a couple of times where Teal'c said a lot so I'm glad you think he's in character. I'll try to write some more to this story soon.
Review By [Damia] • Date [5 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from Damia
Review:
I think your portrayal of Teal'c is spot on. He speaks more than a lot of authors like to admit, just as Oz does. As a fan and avid watcher of both shows I've noticed that when they need to get a point across or they feel something is going wrong or they just feel strongly about something they can be quite vocal. If anyone argues I'll gladly quote a few episodes. Keep up the good work and stop leaving me at the edge of my seat.
- D
Review By [Damia] • Date [5 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from VillageOrchid
Review:
A very interesting chapter ending. I almost missed the cliffhanger!
Comments from author:
*hehe* I wrote the last bit, including the cliffhanger, months after the rest of the chapter. I'm glad you found it 'interesting.' ^_^
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from grd
Review:
Love what you have written. Eager for more.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Maybe I'll work on the chapter of this this weekend! ^_~
Review By [grd] • Date [5 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from Bobboky
Review:
very cool
Comments from author:
Thanks! ^_^
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [4 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from goldengeisha
Review:
Loving it! Very interesting and original.
Comments from author:
Thankies! When I get an idea I go with it! Glad you like it.
Review By [goldengeisha] • Date [3 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Teal'c is in character, dont worry! I think that having Cordelia as an influence may be change Teal'c a bit...

I wonder what is going to happen? I think the SG1 should go on a mission for a few months- in this time Darla should return pregnant and give birth to Connor. Angel then gives Connor to Cordy to raise since demons don't go there...Connor would be able to have a somewhat normal life... Teal'c should come back to find Cordy been mummy to a little boy... I could also imagine Dennis wanting to help look after Connor- for example at night if Cordy has had a bad day at work he could look after baby Connor...

I love the character Connor, there are too few stories with Connor involved in a somewhat main part. I even started my own Connor Challenges...some have been taken...but we still need more! -whines-

If not Connor, then Xander should visit... I always felt like Xander would have remained friends with Cordy, I think when they were dating Xander really tried to understand her... and i think from the Sunnydale gang Xander would have remained in touch...
Comments from author:
I think Teal'c is becoming a little more outspoken thanks to Cordy. I hadn't even noticed. Good eye!

I haven't seen many episodes with Connor but I think he just might end up in this story... eventually. I don't think Darla has returned yet in the Angel cannon time line. Invisible babysitters... I haven't seen that in any fics yet! *hehe*

Xander is so in Cordy's life in this story. I love Xander, he's my favorite fanfic character! So far they have kept in touch, Cordy has mentioned calling him a couple of times and his need for a cell phone. ^_~
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [3 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from ephona
Review:
whats going to happen next. update soon
Comments from author:
I've got it started in my head... It's going to be my first action scene so I'm a little nervous. ^_^;;;
Review By [ephona] • Date [2 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Cool!
Comments from author:
YEAH!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [2 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Good luck!

I like this story.
Comments from author:
Thanks! ^_^
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [2 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from prehensileclaw
Review:
Ohh, I look forward to seeing Angel in action
Comments from author:
I hope you'll like it. ^-^ I have started writing the next chapter, I'll try to finish it soon.
Review By [prehensileclaw] • Date [23 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Very interesting...will Connor be in this...Connor could be a baby still and brought to her for her to look after since no demons could get him there...I love how Dennis is in this! I didn't like how in the show he seemed to be just cut out...You are portraying Cordelia perfectly and I am liking how the friendship with Murray has grown...and with Daniel too!

More please!
Comments from author:
WAH!!! You're making me want to write the next chapter! I've got other stuff I need to finish working on before I work on my fanfics some more. Hopefully I'll start writing again in about a week.

Dennis should so have been in the show more. He could have been so helpful, what with being invisible and all... a great spy!

Connor might show up in this story, I'm not sure yet. A lot of the events that occurred in Angel are changing due to the absence of Cordy and presence of Cindy. Plus I'm not really good with the Angel time line.
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [1 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from fanofkali
Review:
Excellent couple of chapters, haven't read it for a while so I got caught up.

Really like this story.
Comments from author:
You're my 150th review on this story!!! Glad you liked the story! I suppose I should start writing the next chapter... ^_^;;;
Review By [fanofkali] • Date [28 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from (Current Donor)MaxGSandeman
Review:
Jonathan and Andrew working for Cindy??? She would have a lot of patience considering her age.

Nice timing, that Wes and Angel turned up when the men in black (not the MIB) decide to attach next door; Jack's place no less.
Comments from author:
There is such an interesting story behind that that I'll have to share eventually!!! Cindy rocks!

It's kind of interesting since the men in black attack was originally set to happen when Angel wasn't there. It just kind of happened this way... ^-^;;
Review By [(Current Donor)MaxGSandeman] • Date [7 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Ordinarily I'd say, "Men in black breaking into Jack's house? How handy to have an ensouled vampire champion staying just next door!" But with Angel apparently unable to show his vampire face or even draw nourishment from the blood he drinks (still not sure why that would be the case, exactly, but I'll go with it), right now, I'm wondering how much of his vampire strength and resistance to bullets he's retained.

This might have to be a case of "Cordy and Dennis to the rescue!", then, with some back-up from Wesley and only-human-like Angel, I guess. Should be interesting, anyway!
Comments from author:
I'll try to explain more about Angel's abilities in the non-magic zone soon. A lot of stuff isn't going to be clear yet since Angel's the first vamp to go into the zone. ^-^ Go Dennis!!!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [6 Mar 09] • Not Rated
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