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Review of chapter "Meeting The Sons And Drake Garwin" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Nice explanation, but if Draco knew Reid a few years ago wouldn't he have heard of the other brothers....surely they ahve being friends since they were born....Update soon, or send me the chp...-hint hint-...I has a spare cookie here...
Comments from author:
Ooo, cookie!

And I guess he might have. But at the same time, you know that Lilah and Reid wouldn't have gotten a warm welcome when they showed up. And I could see Lucius and Narcissa trying to keep their precious Pure-Blood Heir away from the Squib and her half-blood son while they were there. And they would have only been there for a couple of days since Lucius would have been a major ass. But in the time they were there, Lilah managed to get Draco alone long enough to tell him that if he ever needed a safe place to stay, he could go to her. Make sense?
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [17 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meeting The Sons And Drake Garwin" from JarodsSlayer
Review:
*Glares/pouts*

Duh. Blond: Pogue (or) the unthinkable...Aaron. Brunette: Caleb or Tyler.

*blows raspberry/snickers*
Comments from author:
*snickers* Gotcha. That makes sense. But you suggested Draco/Caleb or Draco/Tyler in your first review of chapter two, and I already told you that one of those would be the pairing...So I didn't even think of anyone besides Caleb and Tyler when I saw the second review...So, I guess then the answer would be: Brunette! But you're not getting anymore than that! LOL!
Review By [JarodsSlayer] • Date [17 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meeting The Sons And Drake Garwin" from IceWhisper
Review:
Love that Drac---Drake (=P) felt the need to say twice that the Dark Mark was a really ugly tattoo. It made me giggle.

Is there going to be any romance in this?
Comments from author:
*Grins* I'm glad you liked it! It made me giggle too as I was writing it!

Yup, there will be romance. Pairings for all the boys! Yay! But just a warning, they will all be slash pairings...I'm not saying who will be with who yet, though. None of the pairings will show up until chapter 7 at least, maybe a bit later.

Thanks for the review!

~ Kyra
Review By [IceWhisper] • Date [17 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Waking In Ipswich" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Gives the plot bunny a couple of slices of carrot cake::


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MacGyver: The great thing about a map:
it gets you in and out of places in a lot
of different ways.
- MacGyver (Episode: The Gauntlet)
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Comments from author:
*grins* Thanks!
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [17 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Waking In Ipswich" from JarodsSlayer
Review:
*points to self* I'm pouting here. At least give me a hint: blonde or brunette? That's all I'm asking.
Comments from author:
*snickers* You do realize that both Caleb and Tyler have dark hair, right...? LMAO!
Review By [JarodsSlayer] • Date [17 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Waking In Ipswich" from amari
Review:
Hola!

Really good chapter! Awesome even, lol. I like how you've filled in the gaps without making it obvious that it's what you're doing. But now that you've done that there are so many more questions to answer, like:

- OMG!!! Reid knows abt the UK Magical community? How? When? Where?
- How does Draco cope with muggle clothing and stuff? Isn't he all pureblooded snobbery?
- Why haven't Draco's parents tracked him down yet? A little culling of the family line sounds just like the Malfoy way, lol.
- How are the Sons' magic different from Draco's magic?
- Why didn't the Sons go to an American magical school?

And these are just to begin with! More in my next review...and btw, about the American-ness ...it seems to become less noticeable because Draco's a little fuddled still.

Have I mentioned how awesome I found that chapter? *grins*
Comments from author:
*grins* I'm so glad you thought that chapter was awesome!

-The first question will be answered in the next chapter.
-Hmm, you'll see how he copes with the muggle clothes and stuff in the next few chapters. The biggest example of his reaction to muggle clothes will come in chapter 6. My Draco's gonna be a bit different from Canon!Draco. Partly because he's trying to stay alive and the muggle clothes are an important part of that; and partly because I've always thought that Draco being a Slytherin and having grown up with Lucius Malfoy, would have one wicked mask to hide the real him. And he'll let the real him out around the Sons more and more; he's already more relaxed in Ipswich than he ever was in England.
-His parents haven't come after him and found him because a) Lucius is in Azkaban and therefore -can't- go after him; b) at this point in the story, he's only been gone about 2 hours; and c) I really can't see Narcissa lowering herself to being the one to actually search for him
-I'll try and address this in the next few chapters if I can work it in...(And actually come up with an explanation myself, lol)
-That will tie in with the last question; its because their magic is different.

I hope that answered some of your questions without giving too much away...I don't think I really gave very much away, actually, so go me! LOL

Thanks so much for the amazing review!!! I hope you like the next chpater! I can't wait to see what you think! It'll be up later today!

~ Kyra
Review By [amari] • Date [17 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Waking In Ipswich" from IceWhisper
Review:
Yay! A fic where Draco and Reid are related! I've been waiting for one of these. Everytime I watch The Covenant I scream "DRACO!" whenever Reid comes on screen. O=)

Can't wait for more!

Please update ASAP!
Comments from author:
LMAO! I totally agree with you though! I thought the same thing the first time I watched the movie! And then I was going through some of the pics I have on my computer the other day and saw a pic that I had of Reid and then a pic that I had of Draco and the idea for this pretty much smacked me upside the head, LOL! It was rather insistent on being written, and hey, who am I to argue?

I'm glad you like it so far! Chapter 3 is already written and will be up soon, I can't wait to see what you think of it!

~ Kyra
Review By [IceWhisper] • Date [17 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Waking In Ipswich" from kattz
Review:
i hope Caleb doesn't yell at Reid for Using. he was just helping his cousin. nice chapter!
Comments from author:
Don't worry, Reid won't get yelled at. I honestly hadn't even thought about that when I was writing, but you're actually the second person to mention it. But yeah, he won't get yelled at. Nobody even says anything about him having Used; and even if they had, I can see Caleb not having a problem with it since Reid only Used to help his cousin.

I'm glad you liked the chapter! Chapter 3 will be up sometime tomorrow, I can't wait to see what you think!

~ Kyra
Review By [kattz] • Date [17 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Waking In Ipswich" from Hawkehunt
Review:
Hmmm... Still interested... Hasn't quite grabbed me yet, but still has the potential to become a must-read.
Comments from author:
Well, I'm glad you're still interested, at least. Hopefully, it'll keep the potential long enough to grab you.
Review By [Hawkehunt] • Date [16 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Waking In Ipswich" from JarodsSlayer
Review:
I have a pairing suggestion: Draco/Caleb or Draco/Tyler.
Comments from author:
You'll like who I pair him with then...Though I'm not gonna tell you which one it is. *grins* You'll just have to wait and see!
Review By [JarodsSlayer] • Date [16 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Waking In Ipswich" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
No doubt Reid will get yelled at for using from Caleb...poor Reid...but hey Caleb is hott when he's mad...-drools- Great update, i cant wait for the next chapter....EEE!

xxx

PS I has a cookie
Comments from author:
Hmmm, I hadn't even thought of that....But nope, no Caleb-yellage; I think he'd understand why Reid did it anyway and be willing to forgive it. Though, I do have to agree that Caleb is much with the Hottness when he's mad...Hell, he's just hott anyway!

Chapter 3 will be up tomorrow, I promise!

~ Kyra

P.S. Oooo, cookie!!! I wants one! *gives you puppy dog eyes* Pwease?
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [16 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Refusal And Running" from Hawkehunt
Review:
Interesting timing - The Covenant was on Showtime today here in Oz, and I was watching it when my feed brought me here... There's potential here, so I'm willing to forgo my usual avoidance of anything with Draco as a main character, especially considering your other stories.

Don't let me down! Live up to the reputation you've made for yourself :)
Comments from author:
LOL! That is interesting! I'm glad you're willing to give it a shot even though you don't like Draco-centric stories; it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy that you like my stories enough to give it a shot! *grins*

Chapter 2 is up, I can't wait to see what you think of it.

thanks for the review and the wonderful compliments!

~ Kyra
Review By [Hawkehunt] • Date [16 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Refusal And Running" from kattz
Review:
it's just the first chapter but i already know I'm going to love your story. i can totally see Draco and Reid being related. And Draco standing up for himself is a definite change from how he is usually portrayed. Good job! can't wait to read what happens next.
Comments from author:
*grins* Thanks! Draco and Reid could DEFINITELY be related! Draco is one of my favorite characters, and I could actually see him standing up for himself, I think he's smart enough to think for himself. I'm really glad you like this so far! Chapter 2 will be up soon!

Thanks for the review!

~ Kyra
Review By [kattz] • Date [16 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Refusal And Running" from JarodsSlayer
Review:
Love it. And I was wondering what your pairing ideas were for this story.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you love it! As for the pairings, I'm not gonna give any away just yet; but I will say that there will NOT be Pogue/Kate or Caleb/Sarah, I'm not really a big fan of either girl... I'll also say that all of the pairings will be slash pairings, but I'm not gonna say who's gonna be with who yet.

Thanks for reviewing! Reviews make my day!

~ Kyra
Review By [JarodsSlayer] • Date [15 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Refusal And Running" from demanda
Review:
Great start! You really began with a strong beginning. As for starting a new story, go for it! The more you write the happier I will be, but just remember to also update your other stories regularly. There is nothing worse than a well written story that is left unfinished.
Comments from author:
*grins* Thanks! I'm glad you like it so far. I'm trying to get some of my other stories updated aswell, but they just aren't cooperating. *pouts*

Thanks for the review!

~ Kyra
Review By [demanda] • Date [15 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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