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Review of chapter "Books and The Simpsons" from Clandestine
Review:
Uh-oh...LOL.
Review By [Clandestine] • Date [19 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Books and The Simpsons" from littleoldme
Review:
I'm absolutely adoring this story. Jack and Dawn's still somewhat awkward relationship is amazingly well done, and I like the twist that she needs one of Daniel's books. I also love that Jack most definitely isn't just going to give it to her and let her run off into the night alone, and that this will be the impetus for their being a part of each other's lives. The characterizations are nothing short of beautiful, and the whole thing is really well-written. I love!
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [19 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Books and The Simpsons" from Greywizard
Review:
I"m quite happy to see a notice that another chapter of this show up in my inbox. ;-)

This is an excellent way to merge the two 'verses in an initially indirect way, since Dawn was actually coming to see Danny instead of Jack - which must do his ego a lot of good. ;-)

And Danny's last comment is definitely going to make Jack a lot more tenacious about getting an explanation from Dawn about exactly what is going on.

If, as it seems right now, Dawn actually stranded Buffy and/or some of the other Scoobies - or possibly some min-Slayers and/or newbie Watchers by accidentally creating a portal, then it's gonna take a *whole* lot of ice cream and shoe-shopping trips to get things back on an even keel. ;-)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [19 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Books and The Simpsons" from AllenPitt
Review:
So...she accidentally sent Buffy through a portal? Ouch. Might be fun if it would take the stargate to find her. Odds are the council has records about the Goa'uld (as 'demon gods of Egypt who left through a portal') for a nice tie-in.
The fun part is, Riley's group knows about Buffy's (obviously) which means 'the government' does on some level. Dawn meeting with Jack might set off some alarms...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [19 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "It's a Marshmallow Thing" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
So you get me all hot and bothered and hooked on your series... and then... you've abandoned it. Say it ain't so. Please.

Blue... who really is.
Comments from author:
I haven't! I swear! I have a lot of English classes this semester and have been piled up with reports and novels, not to mention work. I'm working on all of my chapters, slowly but surely. They will be updated eventually, I swear it, I just have to put in the time.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [30 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dreams & Crappy Explanations" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Hope you'll continue this one day!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [14 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dreams & Crappy Explanations" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Ooooh-kay
So... this is apparently post-Sunnydale sinkhole.
Wouldn't Jack have checked in with them when the TOWN went poof?
What's going on?
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [9 Jul 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dreams & Crappy Explanations" from SpacedCadet
Review:
OK, a good start...but not really enough to know where you're going with this

More please!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [21 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dreams & Crappy Explanations" from spring
Review:
Okay that didn't tell me much except that Dawn blames herself for something that affected Buffy. More soon please.
Review By [spring] • Date [1 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dreams & Crappy Explanations" from purrfus
Review:
I'm so confused... but in a really good sorta way. More please.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [1 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dreams & Crappy Explanations" from Trace
Review:
I think I'm as confused as Jack is, though I have a better idea of the possibilities of what might've happened than he does. More, please?
Review By [Trace] • Date [1 Dec 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dreams & Crappy Explanations" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Some unusual stuff here. Looking forward to seeing where you take it.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dreams & Crappy Explanations" from Bobboky
Review:
liked it
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [30 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dreams & Crappy Explanations" from manic
Review:
It was nice to see an update. I can't wait to find out what Dawn got herself into, and what exactly she decides to tell Jack. I look forward to more.
Review By [manic] • Date [30 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dreams & Crappy Explanations" from nicjphill
Review:
I am intrigued to find out what Dawn did to Buffy and how a marshmellow is involved. Can't wait for the next update!
Review By [nicjphill] • Date [30 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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