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Review of chapter "Reactions, Adjustments and Preparations" from prehensileclaw
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Very very cool. I've never heard of the Manga and, based on your description, would probably hate it - but I love your fanfiction. The character interaction is great, the magic is cool, and the plot is moving along nicely.

Thanks for writing =)
Review By [prehensileclaw] • Date [20 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reactions, Adjustments and Preparations" from speakerforthesilent
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When I read, 'I can hurt you,' I seriously fell off of my chair laughing. Keep up the good work.
Review By [speakerforthesilent] • Date [20 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reactions, Adjustments and Preparations" from JoeDineen
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Interesting take on the whole thing. Of course all covers will be blown at the Bronze unless Kendra is guarding somewhere else at the time.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [20 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reactions, Adjustments and Preparations" from deathgeonous
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Still a nice little fic. Thanks for writing it, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [20 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reactions, Adjustments and Preparations" from AllenPitt
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Jesse is tough, he was only in a few scenes. I'd say: like Xander; has a thing for Cordelia .. maybe have him be a bit better at school than Xander? midway between him & Willow? There's got to be a reason he's friends with both....
Hm. In the dark, it might be tough to see Dragon Buffy and recognize her as Buffy Buffy... have to admit, I'm kinda hoping Kendra sticks around; maybe Zabuto gets killed and G. becomes her watcher? She's really interesting. Raised in such a way that she has no social skills, is scared of boys, etc etc. No clothes, no money, no real life. If she did stick around, G would probably make her go to school, too....
Angel is done just right--it's all about redemption, plus being scared of going to hell if he dusts... I'd love to see a Xander/Kendra romance, along with maybe Buffy/Angel ...
Hm, on magic instruction, might be fun if Willow learned from Jenny C---
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [20 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reactions, Adjustments and Preparations" from arkeus
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Very nice so far.

Wonder what kind of power Willow will have.

Dimensional barrier and so on would give the possibility of magical girl lyrical Nanoha type of magic (midchilda type for willow) but... that would be kind of overpowered.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [20 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Necessary Exposition" from speakerforthesilent
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Great stuff! keep up the good work. I so can't wait for more of this.
Review By [speakerforthesilent] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Necessary Exposition" from war
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good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Necessary Exposition" from AkatsukiDaybreak
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Keep up the good work! I love your characterizations and I like how you've made Dragon Half serious (I've read scanlations of the first few chapters and it's really crazy).
Review By [AkatsukiDaybreak] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Necessary Exposition" from TheatricalBarrister
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Nice update. Enjoyable to read. No noticeable typos, grammar, spelling or punctuation errors.

I'm a little confused as to why Willow secretly swiped the paper for the flame vision spell. At this point in the show, Willow was basically honest to a fault, and it seems to me much more likely that she would have simply asked Joyce about magic, rather than immediately start to swipe things. From Joyce's comments, it seems (to me, as a reader) that she might be willing to teach Willow about magic, at least a little. Thus, I wonder why Willow took the paper.
Comments from author:
Well, Joyce was kind of busy at the time. And Willow, well, she wasn't being sneaky or anything. She just likes to learn stuff. We've all got issues. I'm sure she'll ask when she gets a chance.
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Necessary Exposition" from ghostwhowalks
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Very intresting so far, I eagerly await more.

Thank you for sharing
Review By [ghostwhowalks] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Necessary Exposition" from AllenPitt
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try wikipedia--it has some good info on the anime (I used it!) ..I think you 'got' the Master & Darla's personalities very well, that's rare in a writer. Neither survived as long as they did by being stupid (and Luke survived by being strong, even if he was dumb; I mean, mistaking headlights for the sun?)---
Nice note on Rupert Giles----- and wow, when Dr. Zabuto travels, it's by buying a ticket; only if she's alone, does Kendra have to use the storage compartment. That's the Council in a nutshell.
Nice to see Joyce in a story in season one doing something other than looking appalled or grounding Buffy. And hey--B. transformed, her parents just might sense it. And hey --this is a way to introduce Dawn if you want to. ie, they had another kid (and kept that one? Talk about B. having 'issues' from that) -- I really really hope that Giles & Buffy learn about each other & form an alliance--
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Necessary Exposition" from Iceflame
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Interesting >:)
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Necessary Exposition" from deathgeonous
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Good, good fic so far. And yes, Dragon Half was so sillyly stupid that you will have to do a lot of splaning to cover up it's inhaerent stupidity if you go back there. Well, thanks for writing it, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Girl!" from Embarr
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This is interesting. I read the chapter before watching the anime, which it doesn't seem as if I needed to watch since there are only two episodes. It was very funny though. I look forward to seeing the next chapter, and the next, and the next until you've finished the story.
Review By [Embarr] • Date [31 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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