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Review of chapter "Necessary Exposition" from AllenPitt
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try wikipedia--it has some good info on the anime (I used it!) ..I think you 'got' the Master & Darla's personalities very well, that's rare in a writer. Neither survived as long as they did by being stupid (and Luke survived by being strong, even if he was dumb; I mean, mistaking headlights for the sun?)---
Nice note on Rupert Giles----- and wow, when Dr. Zabuto travels, it's by buying a ticket; only if she's alone, does Kendra have to use the storage compartment. That's the Council in a nutshell.
Nice to see Joyce in a story in season one doing something other than looking appalled or grounding Buffy. And hey--B. transformed, her parents just might sense it. And hey --this is a way to introduce Dawn if you want to. ie, they had another kid (and kept that one? Talk about B. having 'issues' from that) -- I really really hope that Giles & Buffy learn about each other & form an alliance--
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Necessary Exposition" from Iceflame
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Interesting >:)
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Necessary Exposition" from deathgeonous
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Good, good fic so far. And yes, Dragon Half was so sillyly stupid that you will have to do a lot of splaning to cover up it's inhaerent stupidity if you go back there. Well, thanks for writing it, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Girl!" from Embarr
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This is interesting. I read the chapter before watching the anime, which it doesn't seem as if I needed to watch since there are only two episodes. It was very funny though. I look forward to seeing the next chapter, and the next, and the next until you've finished the story.
Review By [Embarr] • Date [31 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Girl!" from deathgeonous
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Oddly enough, I've seen that anime. And, yes it seems you are doing it more serious, but that's working out well. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [29 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Girl!" from AkatsukiDaybreak
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I'm so excited that someone answered my challenge ^_^

I'm not familiar with Dragon Half, but this story is really good and I intend to go check out the manga as soon as possible.

Keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
The anime is an OAV series that was abandoned after two episodes. The manga was never translated, but there are several scanlation sites. I'm actually reading it for the first time even as we speak.
Review By [AkatsukiDaybreak] • Date [29 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Girl!" from Tanydwr
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I know nothing about anime or Dragon Half, but if you're clever about writing it, that won't matter at all. Since we'll be learning everything as Buffy does, right?

I loved that Angel went after Giles as the person to tell, and Buffy witnessed everything at Hemery - that works really well. And Jesse survived - hooray!

Keep up the great work, more soon please.

Lol, Tanydwr
Review By [Tanydwr] • Date [28 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Girl!" from HeatherDee
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This one looks promising. I know next to nothing about anime but from what I've seen this could be a good story.
Review By [HeatherDee] • Date [28 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Girl!" from SpinelessPunster
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Well done, adn a good concept, using a non-cliche'd anime/movie.

Kudos, looking forward to more.
Review By [SpinelessPunster] • Date [27 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "New Girl!" from (Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker
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I never even heard of this Anime. I don't even watch Anime but after this i sure want to! This was soo freaking awesome. Please add some more to this. It rocks!
Comments from author:
Well, the Anime I used is actually a pretty mindless comedy -- lots of slapstick violence, D&D parodies, annoying high-pitched girl voices, mistaken identities, and very little in the way of plot. Especially annoying is the deliberate overuse of characters going "superdeformed" for comedic effect.

The Manga has more substance, but all I know about the manga is what I read in Wikipedia. I plan to use a few elements from it, but I won't consider myself bound by anything that happens.

Plus, as I said, my crossover will differ from Dragon Half quite a bit in tone.
Review By [(Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker] • Date [27 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "New Girl!" from TheatricalBarrister
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In general, I don't don't like anime crossovers, but I really enjoyed this first chapter. I'm not familiar with the cross, but it looks interesting, and I'm looking forward to reading more.
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [27 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Girl!" from speakerforthesilent
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Wow. Just Wow. You get an extremely Shiny gold star for this chapter. It is easily the best 'Buffy isn't the Slayer' fic I've ever read. Plus I'd've given you the 10 just for the title, lol. Keep up the good work!
Review By [speakerforthesilent] • Date [27 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "New Girl!" from AllenPitt
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Buffy was at the Hellmouth in the show only because Joyce decided to go there -maybe in the Wishverse she picked the Cleveland Hellmouth instead (even assuming B would be 'drawn' to one)--this is fun.
What does Joyce know about her 'heritage'? Something, apparently. And here instead of "you burned the gym down", it's "oh you poor kid, what a trauma it was!" that's neat.
So--Whistler came to Angel & talked him into helping stop the Master, but no visit to see Kendra (or whoever) getting called? interesting! And he's very slick with the cross, made Giles think he couldn't be a vamp, very clever. (too bad it's not Merrick with the slayer though)-
Next up, Giles will find out about Buffy eventually I hope & maybe recognize what she is?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [27 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Girl!" from Ramenth
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omg dragon-half! Yay!

As for why the Slayer isnt at the Hellmouth... Well, we're shown versions of the world even in the show where she's not there. The wishverse world has Buffy in Cleveland. One girl in all the world means she won't always be at the Hellmouth. The worlds big.
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [27 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Girl!" from JediLaSombra
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Interesting concept but why would the council let the slayer go somewhere else beside the hellmouth now that she was so close? Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Canonically, the Council didn't learn of the Sunnydale Hellmouth's existence until Giles told them, and at the start of the premiere episode, he didn't know either. He only knew that Sunnydale was a mystical convergence, and even that was really more of a theory than anything else. It wasn't until he researched the Harvest that he learned why.
Review By [JediLaSombra] • Date [27 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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