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Review of chapter "The End Of The Beginning" from GoldenRat
Review:
Awesome fic. One very unique small change makes for a very different story.
Review By [GoldenRat] • Date [24 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End Of The Beginning" from Chikageko
Review:
Well hell, This certianly was and enjoyable three episodes... Cool thing saving Jessie; It happens fairly often but I've yet to see a story that kept the character around as more then an occasional mention. You did a good job of him.

I read the basis behind the challenge so I know asking for Xander to find a power of his own is useless and Probably quite to late at this point but seeing him as a useless charactor who's only really there for willows emotional support and plot butt-monkie is... Irksome in even the lightest sence of the word; probably why so many people are hyped on the Xander gets a cool power theme.
Point is, If it's not already to late in your story, could you give Xander and Jessie At least some useful skill to make them if not badass at least more than an after thought or hostage in battle situations? I don't know, teach Jessie Swords and Xander durty fighting or somthing. Make one of them Willows MagisGirl side kick with a small skewed portion of her powers like in negima (shudder) and the other a Gun, stake and imagination. It's really all up to you if your sequel hasn't done so already.

Anyways thanks for listening, It was a Cool story, especially where you gave Joyce both powers and a developed and active personality.

Fun with Kendra... ]:-} She was always sort of a flat charactor in all other stories I've read, thanks for giving her a little life. If you're open to suggestions there I'd give her somthing a little more modern for weapons, Iron-age at least. Most people argue stakes, crosses and holy water over weapons because they think you can't easily conceal them but I know from experiance a good leather jacket can hide a pair of shortswords crossed up the back quite easily and a trench coat can hide just about anything you could want to give her. You've written her training with swords and axes of varying descriptions and she's the slayer besides so use should only be a thing of writing it.
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [25 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End Of The Beginning" from Grindhall
Review:
Just read this again, great story. Loved how you built everything and had the scoobies grow.

Can not wait for their next adventure.

Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
I appreciate it. Been a bit distracted by unemployment for the past...my ghod, eleven months now...but I'm still struggling with it.
Review By [Grindhall] • Date [20 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End Of The Beginning" from mokahi
Review:
I really enjoyed your story. You did a great job keeping everyone in character while taking them in a new direction. The ending was satisfying while being filled with potential for the future.
Review By [mokahi] • Date [11 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End Of The Beginning" from Cristina
Review:
Interesting to see Kendra's development. And Giles is still protective of teenagers and omitting stuff thet he should report to the Council
Review By [Cristina] • Date [26 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Two: Something Resembling a Prologue" from CattyNebulart
Review:
Shekorikath never does anything in this story, neither does Vina, so why bother with them at all? or are they going to show up in the sequel?
Comments from author:
I meant to include them in the vignettes at the end of the story, but I was writing in a hurry and they fell through the cracks. They show up in chapter two of "The Claws That Catch," but I still haven't been able to finish that, due to some serious real-life problems that still haven't been resolved. But I'm trying to get back into it.
Review By [CattyNebulart] • Date [6 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End Of The Beginning" from wraithrune
Review:
This story is priceless :D please do continue it. All the best!
Review By [wraithrune] • Date [9 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End Of The Beginning" from GundumM
Review:
very nice
Review By [GundumM] • Date [26 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End Of The Beginning" from ForSpite
Review:
This story is amazingly well-written, frankly. Your use of humor is excellent and your ability to blend disparate source materials into a cohesive whole is superb.

Plus, kudos on remembering that even if we didn't see him, Wilkins was there the first few seasons and might react to things happening differently, which makes him unique among Buffy big bads since the comics at least indicate the Initiative moved in after he was gone (which makes sense since I doubt he would have stood for them).

Good job on Cordelia the effective vampire, as well. Since she became surprisingly effective in the fight for good in the main timestream, it's only logical that the vampire her would be surprisingly effective as well, since they take a warped version of the person's strengths (except for the ones that turn out dumb).

It was also nice to see that the main characters, despite being stronger, actually had MORE trouble with a threat in a crossover story since many heroic battles end up hinging on chance events that need not happen the same way once the butterfly effect engages.
Review By [ForSpite] • Date [23 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End Of The Beginning" from Ansku
Review:
Awesome :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [1 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End Of The Beginning" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Wow what a wonderful ending really love how you both tied up loose ends and at the same time opened up new avenues for future stories.

The character development throughout this story was fantastically done and came across as very believable.

The ending scene with Buffy and Willow was bloody cute.

Thanks for sharing!

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [1 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Crucible" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Oh bloody hell you had me giggling like mad with during the scene involving Willow discovering her power!

You did a awesome job with both the fight scenes and the bantering that went with them.

Good work!

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [1 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Consequences" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Interesting touch about Willow being influenced, also like Mr. Wuffles... can't wait to see what happens with him.

So far you are doing a great job in keeping the canon character intact and recognizable even with the AU changes within your story.

Simply love your version of Cordi, have to say one of the best Vamp Cordi's done I've read.

Wispr
Comments from author:
I wasn't aware anyone had ever done a Vamp Cordy before...except in one Star Trek crossover, where it was grown-up Cordy and she had a soul. I've never seen a fic with Evil Vamp Teen Cordy, and I thought the world was really missing out, so...
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [1 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Quick And Easy Solution" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Poor Amy she's having a rougher time this time around isn't she. Like the scene between Giles and Joyce, very well written. Kendra playing D&D, now that's going to be a blast.

Can't wait to see what kind of effects Willow's spell has for everyone, especially her.

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [1 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Same Day Service" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Very nice twist to how this EP played out. I like seeing Jessie and Kendra's interactions and again you're doing great with how both of their personalities are developing.

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [1 Feb 09] • Not Rated
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