Awesome chapter! Your version of Buffy as a mother is very sweet, and you're doing a good job with writing a four-year-old Dawn who seems realistically four. Can't wait for Dawnie to meet SG-1! She'll have them wrapped around her little finger in no time.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [20 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Not my preferred way to make Dawn anyone's daughter, but it's also more realistic, if not practical. Still, I can't wait to see what the SGC has to say about 'B. Summers.' MWAHAHAHA!!
Review By [Jonakhensu] • Date [20 Sep 08] • Not Rated
This does seem to be an interesting concept and I look forward to seeing more. There are some odd grammar errors in the story (and the summary) that you may want to look into fixing.
I believe that live should be life and that 'about now' would probably be better as just 'many slayers now' or 'many slayers about'
Comments from author:
I'm known for odd grammar :P (tenses and prepositions hate me, yep). Anyway, could you point me towards the summary ones please?
Review By [SilentGiant] • Date [14 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Great concept. I've always wanted to see Buffy as a mother, and I like how you made Dawn her daughter. I can't wait for the SGC to meet Buffy. Please update soon!!
Review By [katgurl] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Hmm interesting beginning. Is Buffy going to end up going off world or is just planning to train people I wonder, and how long will it last if that is what she is planning.
Review By [FireDragon] • Date [4 Sep 08] • Not Rated