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Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker
Review:
Love it!
Review By [(Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker] • Date [21 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Bunney
Review:
This is getting better and better and I am really looking forward to how all this works out :)

Later and Love
Bunney
Review By [Bunney] • Date [21 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Ladykind
Review:
I love the story and look forward to more! Its interesting and I love how you changed it to where Buffy is Dawn's Mom...Great Job!
Review By [Ladykind] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from WannaBeSlayerWitch
Review:
okay, i totally adore this fic!
You have to update, like immediately
Comments from author:
Thanks.
I have to, like, write another chapter first! LOL
Review By [WannaBeSlayerWitch] • Date [14 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Awww...! Another good one.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Javian
Review:
Excellent, this is moving along nicely. :)
Review By [Javian] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from immortalsilence
Review:
ooohhh yes more chapters pretty please can't wait till buffy meets jack!
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Clandestine
Review:
I adore this story just so you know. LOL. Can't wait for the next chapter, great job!
Review By [Clandestine] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from oldgirllost
Review:
I like the 'Graduation Day with Dawn being born at home' story the monks put together better than the original series version. For one thing they won't both be as devastated by Joyce's death and Dawn doesn't have the trauma of realizing that all of her childhood was a fantasy. She gets a real childhood in exchange. A weird one, but still a real one. At age four the truth of her conception is not really a big issue to her. (Hey -- when a playmate of mine tried to tell me where babies really came from I didn't believe it. Just too weird.) She's loved and she's happy. Of course repeated kidnapping attempts and now the NID coming into her life might end up causing her young life grief but Dawn is essentially a very tough person and being raised by the Slayer would only make her tougher.

However I see confusion in SGC if she ever has a DNA test and Jack finds out he is her father, since this is from season seven of SGC he probably wasn't on planet, much less in California, at the time she was supposed to have been conceived, and at some point her mystical origins will be revealed I suspect.

Looking forward to whatever you do
This is a good story.
Thanks.
Review By [oldgirllost] • Date [12 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from spring
Review:
thank you for the splany! I love this wonderful fic so far more soon please.
Review By [spring] • Date [12 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Coralskipper
Review:
Another good chapter. I cannot tell you how much I truly appreciated you saying exactly what happened with Dawn.
Review By [Coralskipper] • Date [12 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
Great great chappie! Dawnie is just so adorable! Can't wait til she gets in contact with the SGC :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [12 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from RocksandGlass
Review:
Another nice chapter. I can see Janet's thoughts now though, this B. Summers that Col. O'Neill is so agitated about couldn't possibly be the same Buffy Summers I met last night, it must be a coincidence. And of course, Jack's reaction to meeting B. Summers, something of a repeat of meeting Captain Carter perhaps? Though without the same chemistry, and a far more impressive physical demonstration than arm wrestling an old air force officer, perhaps throwing a Jaffa across the room? Should definitely be interesting when it happens.
I like the back story you've presented, much as I love B/A, the essentially fatherless nature of Dawn is far better suited to this story, more integration of the Summers girls with the Stargate stuff and people, and an easier concentration on two external characters rather than many. The writing itself is still very good and the style and plot are gripping, I'm looking forward to more.
Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [12 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Hermionetobe
Review:
Yes, yes. Very well done. Funny and touching and a lot of really relevent information.
And setting up that timeline helped.

Waiting for more

Hermione2be
Review By [Hermionetobe] • Date [12 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from immortalwizardelffan
Review:
Hmmmm I bet Dawn's father is Mini-Jack isn't it?
Review By [immortalwizardelffan] • Date [12 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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