This rocks!

I like this. I hope there is more and I do hope the gang is not gone for good.

sooo close! i'm totally drooling in anticipation of shifu's arival

and to think...maybe the stargate could take Glory home. Can't you just picture her pounding away at that giant metal door leading into the base? I doubt even Glory could knock her way through that!
Anyway--an attack by those leprous hobbits would be ineffective, but would trigger a "Foothold!" alert, with the SGC thinking earth had been invaded by aliens. That could get interesting. Not to mention Knights of B with those forehead tattoos. Obviously a Goa'uld inspired cult of some kind. Anyway to get Spike, Angel or Faith into the story?

Thanks for the reminder, I left the last bit out of the chapter. It's in there now. Thanks! glad you liked, and yes that is a very funny visual. Thanks, I need all the laughter I can get.

love xx Shezzi

ooo, shifu gonna pop up and make trou-ble!

Why would they pick colorado springs from new york? I need more Willow Tara as players
in this drama. Bringing them in now seems late in the story,unless many more chapters
are planned. The in the mountain developments are compelling and fun to read.

Intriguing! So Tara and Willow are going to Colorado Springs for their own reasons, unaware that Dawn is there?

More Dawnie goodness from you! I'm enjoying your depiction of Riley in this one a lot and appreciate how the plot seems to be thickening.

Really great story so far!

I'm loving the Au-ness of ending of the season with almost everyone being killed except for Dawn, Willow and Tara. Awesome idea! I also love Dawn and Tara and Willow splitting up and Dawn going to Colorado Springs and meeting the SG-1 crew... And the adding of Riley is pretty neat too.

Dawn's new back-history with her being an Ancient and all is simply fabulous. Really interesting idea! I can't wait to see where you go with it...

Ooooh, so Tara and Willow are heading to Colorado Springs? That's not really good news with Glory following them...

Anyways, this is a incredible fic... I look forward to reading more!!

Cool premise, nice introduction and excellent movement. OK I really like this story. Now all we have to to get Glory thrown into a star or black hole and we should be fine. Please continue.

You have done a nice job with this story so far and I am looking forward to read more when you get inspired to add more chapters to it.

::Gives the plot bunny some Corn crab soup::

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arriving at Dawn's hiding place by coincidence? Only the scoobies could manage that. One wonders if the Asgard know about the Key...
Faith having a dream about all this makes sense, and Angel would definitely come running once he heard. Faith might break out in order to help, for that matter.
Glad to see you haven't given up on this story! The 'brother' is a real interesting addition to the story.

OK, no two ways about it; THAT is a cool idea!

Dawn as OMA'S daughter? Now THAT is original!

Actually, that does raise a couple of interesting thoughts; given that Dawn's an Ancient, maybe Glory could turn out to have some connection to the Ori in this reality (You know, like maybe she's an Ori who tried to enter this universe and was 'banished' down to the lower planes by the Ancients, and is now seeking Dawn without actually consciously knowing what the two of them REALLY are?)?

Well, keep up the good work; I look forward to see where this story goes from here.

wow! i'm totally intr... uhm, fascinated. never read this idea for dawn's real family before.

Interesting spin. i'm intrigued.
Keep up the good work.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.