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Review of story "Bits and Pieces" from kayron
Review:
A reformed Faith and Xander 'White Knight' Harris would have made great parents. But Xander made the best decision he could to protect his kids.
Comments from author:
She wasn't quite reformed at that point, though, so yeah, he made the only decision he thought he could.
Review By [kayron] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of story "Bits and Pieces" from Caliadragon
Review:
Awww... how heartbreakingly sweet.


Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
Thanks. I hadn't written Xander/Faith in awhile, and this is what I came up with.
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [24 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of story "Bits and Pieces" from Neverwillmini
Review:
Loved the names Xander gave the kids. What if after the empowerment, something happens and both children get some Slayer-type powers? I could see the adoptive mother contacting Xander after several months to find out if he can tell her ANYTHING more about their genetic background that might explain what's happening (I'm assuming he was thorough and provided a cell number in addition to the address to send the pictures, and maybe an alternate contact name if she couldn't reach him).

I can see the news dragging him back from Africa, causing Wood to drop Faith, and the Scoobies being gobsmacked when Xander & Faith end up getting their kids back because the adoptive family can't handle knowing about the Supernatural and wanting NO ties or reminders of it. There could also be some major prophecies regarding Hope & Justice from the White Knight and the Dark Slayer too (another reason Giles was looking for Faith's children).
Comments from author:
Thanks, they just seemed to fit. Oh, I have plans. Plans and Ideas for this story. It's just finding the time to write it. (And the will to write it.)
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [24 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of story "Bits and Pieces" from Tjack
Review:
Sweet. I mean that both ways.
Comments from author:
Cool. I mean that in the best way.
Review By [Tjack] • Date [24 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of story "Bits and Pieces" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Very sweet!
Comments from author:
Thankies!
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [24 Jun 10] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of chapter "Eye of the Beholden (Glee)" from PrincessTai
Review:
I am absolutely in love with all of your Glee stories. Not because you play up Puck's protective side and heart while still keeping him a jackass. Not because you give Mike and Matt personalities. Not because the fact that Santana is stilll a MAJOR bitch and trouble maker but she has her gleeks backs. But all of that and more. You have them their for each other. You keep them in character but flesh out aspects and personalities. Like what Quinn did, taking his hand, and what she said. Was SUCH a Quinn response. And I can see Puck's face when he pointed out she was pretty. I love when he matures.

I love their connectiveness.

>>>(Puck had a list of all the people that had the potential to go crazy and shoot up McKinley High. Before Glee, Rachel Berry had held the top spot. Now, if Berry didn’t break down and date him, it was totally Jewfro.)
And I love this line. LOL.

>>>>“Penny for your thoughts,” Quinn asked, although her eyes never left St. James. Yeah, she didn’t like him, either.

Puck swallowed and said, “I became a Gleek today.”

Quinn smiled and laid her head on his shoulder. “Me, too.”

And this. I usually don't ship them. But there are moments where they are so perfect together. Like they're well slotted. The finale so showed that and this moment reminded me of that. This so deserves a ten out of ten. For being wonderful in it's straightforwardness. It is what it is, but it's sooo good. If I could give more. I would have :-D
Comments from author:
(I've tried replying to this one a couple of times already, so if you get multiple replies, my bad. My computer is being very bad, I guess. In a nutshell, thank you for this review, I really appreciate it.)
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [9 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of story "Bits and Pieces" from PrincessTai
Review:
I. Loved. This. I just enjoyed it. I loved ALL the numbers but my favorites were 8, 7, 6. and 1

>>He’s in like with a woman that hoards money like a dragon and in lust with a guy that knows how to kill a man with an appetizer.
O.o. Huh. :-P

>>>He’s learning, though, that when a person belongs with somebody, or a group of somebodies, it can just take a phone call to bring them home again.
Hardison is such a great middle child :-P LOL But honestly. I love how he just gets some things. I don't know how to describe it. Since they all get SOME things. But it was fitting that it was him that called.
Comments from author:
This makes me very happy. :) I'm glad you liked it so well.

Hardison/Parker/Eliot! OT3, yes please.

Hardison, to me, really is the only sane person on the team. (Sorry Sophie) And he just seems the type that would reach out. He, out of all the rest, is also the least socially retarded. (I mean, Eliot can pick up a girl, but he can't do forever, so.)
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [9 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of chapter "Eye of the Beholden (Glee)" from Caliadragon
Review:
I love that Puck defended the Gleeks and I really like that Quinn approved and became like him.


Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
I have, weirdly, had part of this story written for a long time, around the time I started watching. And then the Beautiful scene played right into my hands and it all came out and I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [8 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eye of the Beholden (Glee)" from smolder
Review:
Oh, dear. I loved this ficlet way to much. But then again, who can not like Puck?
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Not I, darlin', not I.
Review By [smolder] • Date [8 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Eye of the Beholden (Glee)" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
GO PUCK! WOOP! This is plain awesome!
Comments from author:
Thanks. I've had the whole, Puck's rep is blown over Mercedes thing for awhile, I just didn't know how to apply it. Then she sang 'Beautiful' and my mind kicked over to this. Glad you liked it.
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [7 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Eye of the Beholden (Glee)" from (Past Donor)akat
Review:
I love this! It's the perfect way for Puck to realize he's a Gleek after all. :) And I can totally see him (as opposed to Finn) as the one to finally face off with the rest of the jocks. Great job!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I don't see him realizing without some threatening going on, so you know. :) Finn has been played as the guy that bows to peer pressure. Puck is...Puck.
Review By [(Past Donor)akat] • Date [7 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of story "Bits and Pieces" from DirectorLady
Review:
Yes please. I love Xander/Connor and very few people write them together.
Comments from author:
Which is weird because they are both just so pretty. I've got a couple of drabbles, maybe, in mind.
Review By [DirectorLady] • Date [1 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of story "Bits and Pieces" from nightslayer
Review:
i love your shorts!! the whole thing was great, specailly loved your leverage ones!! the triangle between our hacker, thief and hitter was great.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad you liked them. It's one of my favorite Leverage pairings, so I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [nightslayer] • Date [20 Feb 10] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of story "Bits and Pieces" from Nephir
Review:
Yes -- please continue this drabble. It's a fairly rare pairing and I'd love to see more of the story.
Comments from author:
I have a very serious idea about it but I don't know if it'd go farther than just one or two more drabbles. I actually really like this pairing, so we'll see what crops up.
Review By [Nephir] • Date [19 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of story "Bits and Pieces" from DeeRose
Review:
That was just made of win. I loved the whole Leverage section... the characters all felt real and complete with out being OoC. The relationship dynamics where both fun and interesting to read (even if I usually ship Elliot/Nate). Thank you for posting, and I hope to see more.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Leverage just jumped up and smacked me, wanting stories written for them. And since I'm new to writing Leverage, I'm glad you say I made them feel real without being OoC. I can ship Eliot with anybody because, for real, he's the little black dress of the Leverage fandom. Still, though, I mostly ship Eliot/Parker/Hardison. Because I likes my threesomes. I can't promise as to when but soonish.
Review By [DeeRose] • Date [18 Feb 10] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
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