Review of chapter "Chapter 89.... the end....." from Ancalador
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If this thing was capable of giving higher then 10/10 that's what I'd give you. A bloody brilliant story that I will definitely be reading again in the future.
Now if you'll excuse me I plan on reading your other stories.
Keep up the great work.
Review By [Ancalador] • Date [9 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 89.... the end....." from jcon
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Just read this. What a wonderful suprise. So enjoyed all the crossovers in the fanfiction. Xander was well written & most characters were also written well. Got a bit lost with the alien for a while then backtracked to get it in order. Impressed with the whole story.
Please to see that you continue to write.
Review By [jcon] • Date [31 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 89.... the end....." from atticus
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This needs a follow up. It really does. Am I not alone in desiring this? Let the man know how you feel people.
Review of chapter "Chapter 89.... the end....." from Mechconstrictor
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I must say that I enjoyed reading this story. Though, I have to say that the last 20 or so chapters had a little bit too much thrown in it. Anyway, keep up the good work.
Review By [Mechconstrictor] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 89.... the end....." from firedrakegirl
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I love it!!! Please write a sequel or something!!!!!!!!! I couldn't stop reading it!
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [2 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 89.... the end....." from Narf
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Wow what a story you have me reading this one for days hell I was even reading it at work. The only fault I have with it is that I think it could have use a bit more of the events of Sunnydale in it. Don't get me wrong I enjoyed the smackdown of Glory. But I like the other cast members of Buffy should of been in the story a bit more. Anyway thanks for the great story Bye.
Review By [Narf] • Date [1 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 89.... the end....." from GundumM
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great fic. although i don't like you yanking Ben away from Felicia and Jenifer.
Review By [GundumM] • Date [25 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 89.... the end....." from TheDon
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i was readin an hp/sg-1 crossover fic and during a sequence where genetics was involved i had a flash thought to your story. it was kinda random but whatever. what i was thinkin was that chamber that could awaken latent animal genes and give the human the abilities of the animal, plus the new and improved rebirth chamber thats would lengthen peoples lifespan. i thought why didnt cordelia ever use it? i mean its been stated that xander was gonna out life her but with the rebirth formula and whatever animal her dna leans towards woulda prolonged her life even longer, so i was just wandering why she never used it.
It started off great, well written and everything. And then, it started to drift downhill slowly. Agonizingly slow, yet relatively quick in comparison to how long the story actually is. I couldn't make it no where near halfway through this story. Couldn't take much more after the graduation and the start of the road-trip.
Review By [NeedlessNoodles] • Date [11 Jan 10] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 89.... the end....." from Godogma
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It started in excellent fashion, then you built so much onto it you weren't doing a very good job hanging on. I recommend in the future that you plan out steps you want your story to take and spend more time on characterization and character development in general as well as sticking with one group of characters for a time and then switching - brief flashes of the characters lives works better on television than in a written format. Toward the end I didn't care about any of the characters and was just reading to know how the story ended.
jcon
