Review of chapter "Chapter 89.... the end....." from Dhampyr
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It was a great fic in general, but the ending was way too short and stilted. I'd really like to see a couple of things addressed, such as an epilogue with Mystique and her kids and how they are getting along (or not) a couple of years in the future; or things like the fact that Logan is actually Sabertooth's half-brother, and thus Xander, Ben, and Graydon's uncle. Maybe something with what happened to Hydra and Captain America since those were kind of left hanging.
Review By [Dhampyr] • Date [21 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 89.... the end....." from lokison
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Great Story! I would have liked to see Xander get with the 2 extra cat hotties that Buffy said he would get if he did not get Black Cat. I would like to see you work on and complete The Child of Rao Before you start anything else. A Alexander Creed / Pokgirl crossover would be kinda cool too, but mostly I really want more Child of Rao!
Review By [lokison] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 89.... the end....." from Ansku
Review of chapter "Chapter 89.... the end....." from dorkmoon
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Thanks for such a long, enjoyable story! My only compliant is that Xander became a background character after his clone Bengali took over, which was a little off-putting.
It'd be cool if you updated "Child of Rao", or "Eureka!...So Go Shower or something", or "Potterville", or "TIVOR."
Review By [dorkmoon] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 89.... the end....." from Dragonhulk
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Yeah, after 89 chapters I can say this is long enough, and it was a fun story too.
A part of me would like to see you do a sequle with Ben as an Exile (own every issue of the series so I love good crosses using it), but I understand if you're burned out of the verse after such a long story.
On the other hand I'd love to see more Child of Rao or Tivor, so whatever you decide to work on I'll be sure to R&R.
Comments from author:
well thanks, there is one short story I've been thinking about that would fit better under your Xander as Marvel Style. After the Replacement episode he keeps splitting in copies of himself after the spell is reversed like Jamie Maddrox. I can just see a stampede of Xander's running away from Anya with a crazed gleam in her eye.
Review By [Dragonhulk] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 89.... the end....." from XanderHalcyon
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Sad to see it go but I loved it while it lasted. I cannot wait to read whatever other fantastic stories pop out of your brain next but you can guarantee that I will love it. Keep up the good work.
Review By [XanderHalcyon] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 89.... the end....." from eriktheviking
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That's an interesting family reunion. Great writing, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 89.... the end....." from Fyrloche
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That is about as lame an ending as Angel. I have liked the story and I know that it had to be chaotic to keep things straight but, dang! Hopefully, you'll decide to revisit this someday and tie up the loose ends. Don't get me wrong, this story was great while it lasted. Luck on your next project. I'm sure that I'll be reading it when it comes out.
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 89.... the end....." from cjcold
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Nice ending.
Hopefully Mystique will stay with her children and get to know them.
The whole thing with Ben seemed to come out of left field, last we heard he was in LA with his two girls. Surprised the girls haven't contacted Xander for help finding him. Or is this what Buffy the Seer meant when she thought of Xander having two other lovers. Will they seek comfort from Xander.
Hope to see the sequel to this one day.
More soon please.
Review By [cjcold] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 89.... the end....." from nemogbr
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Thanks for the story.
Not happily ever after, but more along the lines of hopeful beginnings.
Please write a sequel.
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 89.... the end....." from ChaoticTempest
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WoW I loved this. It's soo good but kinda out of no where on the ending...oh well, 89 chapters is a LOT! I hope you consider a sequel(picture Ben meeting TJ!!) or maybe updating Tivor~hint hint~ Anyways LOVED IT!
Review By [ChaoticTempest] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 89.... the end....." from Morgomir
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Kind of confusing. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 89.... the end....." from Dragonelf
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You have done an excellent job with this story and I love the way you left an opening for a sequel. Congratulations on a job well done!
This story has been added to my list of Recomended stories and to my list of CoA nominee candidates. (Yes it is that good)
::Gives the plot bunny some Chicken Sandwich in hope it will inspire CrazyDan to write a sequel::
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 89.... the end....." from Bluesnowman
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Awesome story I loved it think you could please pretty please finish up Repossessed, The Child of Rao, and Tivor pretty please.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 89.... the end....." from Questara
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Is a YAY its complete or a Dang it, there's no more? In either case, its been a spectacular ride, and I have to keep reminding myself that this isn't the way it happened in any of the comics.
Review By [Questara] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
