So...Magneto as the father? (I've read originally Chris C. wanted to have Mystique turn out to be his father (while shifted) and Destiny as his mother, just to mess with people's expectations) --this is pretty neat. So the 'real' Xander got sacrificed by Mayor Wilkins. Ouch. And this partially explains his whole 'demon magnet' thing.... Should be fun when the rest of his mutation kicks in, last of all the demonic/blue appearance. I guess the letter prevents him from concluding he's part demon--good move on her part! I wonder how long he can keep it all secret. The longer the better--the scoobies get more tolerant as time goes by--at least until after Oz is outed as a werewolf would be good-- * Makes one wonder what "The Wish" would be like with a vamped xander--would he be super vamp?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [10 Sep 08] • Not Rated
A very interesting beginning. I can just see Buffy with her "Oh God, he's really a demon!" when she finds out, then trying to slay him (unsuccessfully)! I await the next installment semi-patiently!
Review By [ArjaiH] • Date [10 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
huh. and at some point, presumably, the crystal gets smashed. Though I'd imagine the order would be: Giles, who has the mark, casts a spell of some sort on Xander, his true self as Nightcrawler(?) is revealed. Later the crystal gets smashed which would result in Mystique getting her memory back... Boy will she be pissed. He'd also show up on Cerebro like a bonfire.... Poor Xander, from Zeppo to "everybody is after him" in one fell swoop. The X-Men, the Brotherhood, Mystique, Graydon, the list goes on. Not to mention that at first, Xander will think he must be a demon....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [10 Sep 08] • Not Rated
I'm a huge fan of all your stories, my favorite so far being Child of Rao, which I hope you will update sometime soon. I really think this story has got some good potential and I hope you update soon.
Review By [XanderHalcyon] • Date [10 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I hope you go into the same amount of detail and style that you used in Child of Rao, which I think you should start up again, But that's just me. Any way I love this story and anxiously await more.
Review By [TheLaughingMan] • Date [10 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Thanks, been bouncing in my head for a while. It started out as Xander getting stuck in Marvel vs Capcom 2 due to Anyanka but I think this won't spiral so out of control so fast.