What happened with your fics in this, why does it say you viiolated site rules?

Apparently I can't make a chapter devoted entirely to thanking my readers. I've fixed it and moved it the Baldur chapter as soon as I realized what happened, but all I can do is wait for Demona to take notice and free the story up.

I didn't expect to like this one since I'm not a Thor fan, but this was powerful. So good I needed to comment and say how good it was. I wouldn't mind seeing a story in this series.

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I tried to make it powerful while keeping the behavior believable. I figured considering all of the drama on Asgard that when Loki, Thor, Sif, and Baldur were young then there would be some high school shit that had far reaching consequences.

So would this be a Marvel, A Baldur's gate or some other crossover? It's very nicely written and not as "bloody" I guess as your usual fare.

Well, violence is the spice of life but sometimes I like to try something different. It takes place in the Marvel films, but obviously a few centuries before Thor takes place.

This makes me really sad.

I was just trying to do Baldur's story in the Marvel filmverse. Sorry!

I believe him thinking The First is his mother. That works with his character but his mum suggesting he gets as close as possible to Faith at 15?! That has to send some alarms. Of course I can see the progression. One faked will and and right operatives and turning Harry would be easy.

Ah, suspicion is merely suspicion without facts. Or perhaps, Harry is not as easily manipulated by the First as he pretends.

If you want to thank us try updating the normal fanfics you have in your profile.

very nice work

Thanks, glad you liked it.

Thanks!!! That was really sweet! Just for curiosity wich State you are from?

East Tennessee and, yes, I have the same accent as Aldo Raine from Inglourious Basterds. Maynardville is less than 30 minutes drive away. I'm glad you liked my 'thank you', your review is much appreciated.

Thank you. This is great and I can't hardly wait for more.

Your welcome, I'm pleased that you are pleased.

I have been very depressed the past couple of weeks and seeing this has helped to cheer me up some. So I wanted to thank you for sharing. *hugs*

I'm glad it worked the way I wanted it to. I like to be appreciative of my readers. If I can get discouraged or depressed when I write, then they can do the same when they read, so why not share my gratitude and show how thankful I am for investing time in my stories. Once again, thanks for reading. Oh, and if your job does not drug test then I suggest a little taste of some bud. It cures your depression and is used to treat it by many acclaimed doctors. Weed, it's not just for cancer but for depression, arthritis, and lack of appetite with no withdraw or addiction to worry about.

luke son of the dawn
lucifer, the morning star

Connor the attack dog
Connor the red dragon upon which the harlot will ride......faith looks good in red leather.

indeed evil is part of perspective, some could say he got just deserts for his betrayal, others would argue that he rebelled against an unfair system and that he got the short end of the stick in the end.
fallen or not, he is still an angel and now has an innocence and is getting his own piece of 'the human experience' even if it won't last for very long as his current rate of growth.

interestingly enough not all source convey that lucifer and satan are in any way the same. in this storyline they could most certainly be very different. regardless while no one is blameless there has not been proper justice handed out.

I'm of the belief that Lucifer is Satan and is called such names since his angelic name is forbidden to be spoken in Heaven, but that is my own personal view. Maybe I just wanted to give another chance to someone who was once the most loved of all. He could turn or he could be good, but in my story I've given him a chance. There's an old saying that I always found interesting: "People pray for forgiveness of their own sins, for the forgiveness of other sinners, for the starving children in far off lands, but who in the last two thousand years have prayed for the redemption of the greatest sinner? Who has had the common decency to wish that the Devil be forgiven his sins and redeemed in the eyes of God? Who wished for him to realize his mistakes and become beloved by God once more?"

O_o
Fudge got literally destroyed in front of the Wizengamot.
Harry as a future Senior Partner of "Wolfram and Hart" !?
Hart ... James Animagus form ... he was one of the Senior Partners !?

That is a novel idea.
I'd love to read such a story.

Yeppers, you got it all right. Have a cookie. *frisbees cookie into your mouth*. Seriously, thanks for the review.

Nicely done. The story is shaping up very well.

Thanks very much, friend.

Pure genius.

As someone who has a very high respect for genius, I am actually blushing at the compliment. Thank you for the kind review.

I can see where this story is going and I love everything so far, I can't wait for more.

Thank you, I'm happy that I didn't disappoint you.