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Review of chapter "Bane of Evil" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm currently working on part three of Smoke and Mirrors.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sympathy For Sam" from Martin
Review:
This is a great little one-shot. I could just picture the devil in a white suit floating up into the library like that. Very vivid picture. I don't know if a long story could be made out of it, but this little snippet is special.
Comments from author:
I liked it. It was a pleasant little plot bunny that I almost forgot about.
Review By [Martin] • Date [13 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Winter Prince" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
You wouldn't happen to have one for "1984" by George Orwell, wouldja?
Comments from author:
Don't think so. No. Sorry. I'll look into it, though.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [9 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Winter Prince" from ilalthal
Review:
The whole looks like loki so he must be related to him seems a bit of a stretch, People looking similar happens all the time. If it lead with some sign of magic and looks like loki It would be a bit more beliveable.
Comments from author:
The fact that he resembled him so strongly only had be placed under observation. The fact that he disappeared or was capable of disappearing under the eye of SHIELD Agents was what led to Fury going nuts with paranoia.
Review By [ilalthal] • Date [9 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Winter Prince" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good work
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Winter Prince" from Martin
Review:
I was really getting into this. Great story.
Comments from author:
Thanks a lot.
Review By [Martin] • Date [9 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Winter Prince" from JediKnight
Review:
Interesting, but it doesn't seem to be your usual standards.

Have any of your works been taken up by someone else, not that your normal stories are completely dead?
Comments from author:
No one else has taken up any of my stories. What is wrong with this one? Why do you think it isn't up to my usual standards?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [9 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Smoke and Mirrors-Part 2" from Selias
Review:
Oh, I like this one. Any chance of it becoming a full story?
Comments from author:
Your guess is as good as mine. We'll just have to see how things go.
Review By [Selias] • Date [13 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Smoke and Mirrors-Part 2" from PhilH
Review:
I really like this Harry in Smallville. Having him be an old friend of Lex's works very well. I especially liked the bit about a dark haired boy with a crush on an oriental girl he couldn't even talk to, and it being the same with Clark! :) I've tagged this for tracking, and will go though the other chapters too.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it, that is why I do what I do.
Review By [PhilH] • Date [12 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Smoke and Mirrors-Part 2" from EroSlackerMicha
Review:
nice. how about some Cougar, Slade or Knightfall?
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [12 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Smoke and Mirrors-Part 2" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [12 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Smoke and Mirrors-Part 2" from Moontrap
Review:
Another great installment. Thank you for letting us read your work, and I can't wait to read more of it.

Sincerely

John
Comments from author:
Thanks a lot John, hope there's many more chapters yet to come that will make you as happy.
Review By [Moontrap] • Date [12 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Smoke and Mirrors-Part 2" from trongod
Review:
Dear God... Harry just /taunted/ Murphy...

Man, is he in for some serious mind games...
Review By [trongod] • Date [12 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Smoke and Mirrors-Part 2" from Omegaprime
Review:
This is one of the most interesting versions of Harry I have read.

He has an interesting past with Lex and that is cool.

I guess he is going to be the most interesting event that the people of Smallville will remember besides the meteor that crashed into the town.

Geeze, but Harry, you shouldn't tease Murphy like that because he might respond with a Meteor Mutant.

Keep up the interesting work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [12 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Smoke and Mirrors-Part 2" from wonderbee
Review:
Man, Harry just had to waggle his butt in front of fate like that lol, and really enjoyed the time spent here, as it looks like he has and continues to arrive in ways that Smallville hasn't seen since a certain meteor impact.
Review By [wonderbee] • Date [12 Nov 13] • Not Rated
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