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Review of chapter "Everything Burns" from (Current Donor)Vipomus
Review:
Indeed. Interesting. Has much potential.

Your mind works in mysterious ways but of the good ("in Xander speak") :D
Comments from author:
Thanks. I have dozens but these are only the ones I can becomming epic length in the right hands.
Review By [(Current Donor)Vipomus] • Date [5 Feb 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A God In Hiding" from XanderHalcyon
Review:
I really like it. Any chance of continuing it?
Comments from author:
These stories are all up for adoption. That's why I put them up.
Review By [XanderHalcyon] • Date [5 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Everything Burns" from Althalus
Review:
That's an interesting start.
I'd like to see this continued. I can imagine Xander coming back with the League around the time of the battle with the First. That is if the Scoobies can manage to survive ADAM and the Initiative. Only then the Glory episode could happen. But then again. Dawn might be send to Xander and Talia ;-)

Hm. I hope someone picks this up
Comments from author:
Me too.
Review By [Althalus] • Date [5 Feb 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Star Wars" from JediLaSombra
Review:
Kinda got your timelines mixed up since Force Unleashed and the rise of Prince Xizor to power are all post RotS and Darth Maul just completing his Sith training would be pre-PM. Unless there's a time travel loophole in Unleashed there's no way any character from the game could rise to such prominence so quickly.

I haven't played the game so please correct me if I'm wrong.

other than that, it's a good story.
Comments from author:
You're right but Xizor started out very early, he only became notorious after RotS. Yes there is a time travel thing thus Starkiller going back in time to stop Sidious.
Review By [JediLaSombra] • Date [30 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Star Wars" from LordCorwin
Review:
And here I thought this was supposed to be an Xander drabble ..... *mutter*
Comments from author:
For the most part it is, but occassionally I try something different.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [30 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Star Wars" from eriktheviking
Review:
Another well written teaser.
Comments from author:
Thanks man.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [30 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Star Wars" from (Current Donor)Vipomus
Review:
Good beginning. Should be a full story I think. I like the scene. Like the build up. Short story leaves me curious to see what comes next. And that is the sign of a gripping story for me.

Hope you someday build this chap into a full one. I think it's worth it. Especially with the Dark side and Light and the Xander side :D
Comments from author:
It ain't Xander. Actually it's not a BTVS story at all.
Review By [(Current Donor)Vipomus] • Date [30 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Dark Agent" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting one on Scarecrow, not familiar with the ones in chapters 17 and 19 though.
Do you know when you might update your story "The Clown Prince of Justice"?
You're right, I am happy about that. What about using the "Justice League" cartoon for your story "No Fate"?
What about using "Transformers" in "No Fate"?
Comments from author:
Chapter 17 was from the last season of Yu Yu Halusho and !9 was of my own creation. As for updaing Clown Prince, you'll be happy to hear that I am working on it as we speak.

Maybe eventually, but that would take away from the power of the Terminators. So, I doubt it.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [22 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Master Of Fear" from Infinix
Review:
Of your more recent ideas this one definitely has the most potential. A full story would probably be very hard to do but a series of snapshots could be done very well, especially the Xander and Maggie Walsh meeting.

Response: While I would love to do that I have neither the time nor the talent to take this.
Comments from author:
Yep, care to take it up. I would give you permission if you're willing.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [22 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Master Of Fear" from eriktheviking
Review:
A very insightful Scarecrow(?). Well done & thanks.
Comments from author:
Your welcome and yes you spelled it right.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [19 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gandara" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
*shrug*

Interesting setup but I don't know the character Yomi so it really didn't hold my interest for long.
Comments from author:
Check out Yu Yu Hakusho episodes 98 through 104. You will understand.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [15 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gandara" from guise
Review:
go for a full story with this the one shot was pretty good. I don't think I have read a story where someone used yomi and not hiei or kurama or even toya and those were naruto stories
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [guise] • Date [14 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gandara" from neverwill
Review:
Interesting. I'd read more, even though I'm not familiar with the character you were referencing. I'd love to read about the Council's reaction when they found out about Xander. You briefly mentioned it, but I'd love to see what everyone's reaction was. Did Willow distance herself from Buffy at all after Xander disappeared? What were Giles' thoughts?
Comments from author:
It would be interesting..................
Review By [neverwill] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gandara" from Fyrloche
Review:
I like it. Faith may well be ready to be a mother. And I can see her getting mad a Xander, at first, but she would probably agree with him after she gets to think about it. I can also see her wanting to train with Xander and then getting in bed with him after being turned on by the workout. Willow is going to freak out when she finds out how Xander was blinded and how he was changed. If Giles is smart, he will seriously look into the alliance. Alot of potential in this one. Good luck.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I don't have much more say than thank you.
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gandara" from xon
Review:
I LIKE IT!
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [xon] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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