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Review of chapter "A Master Of Fear" from eriktheviking
Review:
A very insightful Scarecrow(?). Well done & thanks.
Comments from author:
Your welcome and yes you spelled it right.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [19 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gandara" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
*shrug*

Interesting setup but I don't know the character Yomi so it really didn't hold my interest for long.
Comments from author:
Check out Yu Yu Hakusho episodes 98 through 104. You will understand.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [15 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gandara" from guise
Review:
go for a full story with this the one shot was pretty good. I don't think I have read a story where someone used yomi and not hiei or kurama or even toya and those were naruto stories
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [guise] • Date [14 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gandara" from neverwill
Review:
Interesting. I'd read more, even though I'm not familiar with the character you were referencing. I'd love to read about the Council's reaction when they found out about Xander. You briefly mentioned it, but I'd love to see what everyone's reaction was. Did Willow distance herself from Buffy at all after Xander disappeared? What were Giles' thoughts?
Comments from author:
It would be interesting..................
Review By [neverwill] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gandara" from Fyrloche
Review:
I like it. Faith may well be ready to be a mother. And I can see her getting mad a Xander, at first, but she would probably agree with him after she gets to think about it. I can also see her wanting to train with Xander and then getting in bed with him after being turned on by the workout. Willow is going to freak out when she finds out how Xander was blinded and how he was changed. If Giles is smart, he will seriously look into the alliance. Alot of potential in this one. Good luck.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I don't have much more say than thank you.
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gandara" from xon
Review:
I LIKE IT!
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [xon] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gandara" from eriktheviking
Review:
I don't have a clue as to the crossover, but I can say it is a brilliantly written story. Well done.
Comments from author:
Thank you. If you want to about Yomi look up Yu Yu Hakusho episodes 98 through 104.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hephaestus" from ChaosRonin
Review:
Intresting idea, reminds of whistler from blade a bit.
Comments from author:
I loosely based the idea off of him.
Review By [ChaosRonin] • Date [11 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hephaestus" from zafaran
Review:
I do like this story, and would be interested if it comes back around and your muse wants to expand it into a multi-chapter story. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Comments from author:
If anyone wants to adopt one of these oneshots then they can. That's why I posted them after all.
Review By [zafaran] • Date [11 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hephaestus" from TheDon
Review:
damn id love too see this get turned into a real story, not to mention that hephaustus is the god of fire/forge and he marries a literal love goddess. maybe he can turn glory to the good side lol.
Comments from author:
The Hephaestus bit is just something feels he can relate to. Someone who is lame and doesn't give, he just keeps helping out those he loves. That's while Xander chose that name. He isn't a god, he just relates to the myth is all.
Review By [TheDon] • Date [11 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hephaestus" from PsychoWing
Review:
This chapter is great and could easily be a beginning to a Supernatural crossover (pity I don't know enough to write it). If you don't want to continue (or just don't have the time) maybe you could post a challenge in reference to this and see if anyone else will write it.
Comments from author:
All these stories are challenges of a sort. Anyone can adopt one as long as they inform me so that I can follow it.
Review By [PsychoWing] • Date [11 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hephaestus" from MavenAlysse
Review:
I've enjoyed your one-shots, they've been a lot of fun. This one - "Hephaestus" - this is one I'd love to see fleshed out and continued. It's one of the few more logical stories where Xander comes into his own, but he isn't all powerful, nor is he magical/supernatural. There'd have to be some more explanation how a broken leg takes him out of the fight, but I can see Xander learning how to help in other ways - even if it did just start out as a way to keep from feeling sorry for himself (I liked that Uncle Rory wasn't a scumbag like Xander's parents). I can definitely see Gunn, or another group like his, using his designs - it could definitely lead out to some possibilities for the "Angel" series, or another crossover.

I really hope you decide to continue with this one.

Thank you so much for sharing!

MavenAlysse
Comments from author:
All these stories are up for adoption. In a way it's my gift to struggling authors who don't know what to write about. It would please me greatly if someone would adopt one of these. You up for it?

I have always believed that while Rory is a drunk that he isn't a mean one.
Review By [MavenAlysse] • Date [11 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hephaestus" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
I like it.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [11 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Hunt" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Sounds like Spike and Dru.
Comments from author:
In a way, but more feral.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [11 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hephaestus" from eriktheviking
Review:
Pure Genius. Very original and a pleasure to imagine it expanded. Thanks.
Comments from author:
Welcome. You could thank me by picking up one of these stories and adopting them.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [11 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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