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Review of chapter "The Letter" from whedoinst
Review:
I like what you have so far! Glad you had the plot bunny. Can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [whedoinst] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Letter" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Gives the plot bunny some carrot soup::

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Don't kick the monster!
Program a robot to smash it,
Shoot it, Spear it or even
Throw something at it (preferably
a grenade), but NEVER kick the monster!
NOTE: does not apply to BLACK BELTS.
- Unknown
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Comments from author:
:-)
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Letter" from redhandgrunt
Review:
Interesting so far. I only caught Stargate off and on for the first few years so I'm not sure who the character is but its a pretty clear situation how you described it.
Comments from author:
Landry wasn't on the show until season 9 and 10 so I'm glad it's still clear enough to understand. Thanks.
Review By [redhandgrunt] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Letter" from (Past Donor)Aynot
Review:
A very solid started. It is also a original Real Family tie.
I hope to see more of this story and soon.
Comments from author:
Hopefully the next part will be out by the weekend.
Review By [(Past Donor)Aynot] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Letter" from Alyssara
Review:
That's a great start, I'm looking forward to reading more :-)
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Alyssara] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Letter" from dugleikoo
Review:
I like it, nice start. Hope you continue it.
Comments from author:
I'll try to get more out soon.
Review By [dugleikoo] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Letter" from slightlyeccentric
Review:
This was great, I don't think that I've ever seen a crossover where Xander is related to Landry. I can't wait to see more of this.
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you liked it.
Review By [slightlyeccentric] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Letter" from Greywizard
Review:
Well, I have to say that Landry would never be my first choice for Xander's father, but that your selection of him can make for a very interesting story.

Should be interesting to see what develops.
Comments from author:
I've wanted to do a Stargate cross for a long time and even had a plot outline for one a few years ago where O'Neil was the father, but nothing came of it. Lately I have been watching repeats of season 9 and 10 and had a bunch of ideas pop in my head begging to be written. Eventually most can fit in that plot I have for this story.

I was even able to save my favourite scene from my original idea. All I'll say is that it involves Xander, Teal'c and Ash Williams.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Letter" from eriktheviking
Review:
Very well written opening using two minor characters.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Letter" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Letter" from Tempe
Review:
Well, I never really like Hank or Carolyn but I really like your story idea. It'll be interesting to see Hank try to find Xander, assuming he tries of course, and whether the military will send someone in if he starts look at records. Well, I hope to see more and maybe you'll be able to turn my view around on the merits of the General and his daughter.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you're giving the story a try even though its around characters that aren't your favourites. As for the Hank and Xander stuff, well you'll have to wait and see. Hopefully it will be worth reading.
Review By [Tempe] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Letter" from Kirallie
Review:
Good start.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Letter" from link
Review:
So far, it's okay. The address given by Jessica no longer valid since Sunnydale went kaboom right? Poor Xander, he just lost Anya and now he's going to know that his father is an unknown straanger. But Landry is better than Tony any day.
Comments from author:
Exactly right. Sunnydale is gone. Landry is better than Tony, but that doesn't mean things will be smooth sailing.
Review By [link] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Letter" from enderverse
Review:
Looks good, standard start to "Xander's Real Family" but with new characters for the role. hope to see more soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks, the 'Xander's Real Family' idea isn't something I've used before (at least not with a pre-existing character). Hopefully I'll be able to keep things interesting.
Review By [enderverse] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Letter" from LordCorwin
Review:
Ok .. I could see Jack O'Niel being the father .. but Landry ... hmm, I'll reserve judgment until I read a couple more chapters.
Comments from author:
I appreciate that. I've seen a bunch of Jack as the father fics and wanted to do something a little different.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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