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Review of chapter "Facing the past" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
That was a pretty awesome read. Thank you for sharing the story with us. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [17 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Facing the past" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Great work! Keep em coming!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [10 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Facing the past" from bradsan
Review:
I never reviewed this story before, but it would please you, I think, that I read it several times. Everytime I read it I enjoyed it more and more. Thank you for writing this awesome story.

it's a lost that you stopped writing after three very good stories.

edit: found you. Now I'm gone read your stories. thank you
Comments from author:
I am happy that you reviewed. And no I didn't stop writing and I have written more than three stories, some are posted on a similar user name on FF.net and others have never left my computer as I didn't finish them or lost faith in them. I am also still writing but the project is so huge that I have been considering giving it up, but my muse won't let me (basically it is a complete rewrite of all Harry Potter books from beginning to end, utterly insane I know).
Review By [bradsan] • Date [14 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Facing the past" from HMaxMarius
Review:
Great story! I've never been one to get hooked on comics, but you gave more than enough info for the comic illiterate novice (me) to figure things out and keep up...


As to Buffy's code name... I don't like Ragnarock either ;)


I'm thinking Firefly!

;)
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Facing the past" from Fearthetwiggy
Review:
Excellent story. Great writing and use of characters. I can see why you ended it where you did; this could have gotten a lot more complicated in the future. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. I can say that I didn't end it where I did because it was getting complicated, I enjoy complicated. It was a lack of interesting in starting a new cycle of chapters and major plotlines, which in a comic based universe essentially is endless.
Review By [Fearthetwiggy] • Date [14 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Facing the past" from Dragonelf
Review:
You did a great job with this story and I hope you one day will get inspired to write a sequel.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Apple Fritters::

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Comments from author:
Thank you, but at the moment I am not writing fanfiction.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [24 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Facing the past" from mountainelements
Review:
I like the characterizations in the story and how you showed everyone's perspectives. The epilogue was nice, but I am left wanting more of the Scoobies together. Great story.
Review By [mountainelements] • Date [12 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Facing the past" from Blackett
Review:
Interesting fic. my first with the x-men that I actually completed
Comments from author:
Thanks, I am glad you finished.
Review By [Blackett] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Facing the past" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Barring my ambiguity about the opening chapter with Whistler telling Angel that there were ‘restrictions’ on his relationship with Buffy at THIS stage (Particularly telling Angel that he’s just a ‘creature of the dark’ who should never have tried to have a relationship with Buffy; given the comments Whistler made about Buffy’s appearance and her impact on Angel during the “Becoming” flashbacks I got the impression he knew about the nature of Angel’s interest in her from the beginning and it was only the unexpected factor of the clause that caused a problem), interesting idea you have here overall.

The twist with Xander’s simultaneously healing and destructive mutant powers came across very well, while his subsequent imprisonment and contact with Toad provided a clear explanation for his ‘descent’ from the ‘white knight’ he was in the series to his willingness to work alongside terrorists as he adapts to his new mutant identity as ‘Triage’ (Even if he retains some degree of morality in his refusal to hurt innocents).

The twist with Hank Summers’s connections to HYDRA and AIM created a particularly interested and unexpected touch; it might have been a bit sudden, but it certainly gave Buffy a good reason to go underground as she adapted to her new mutant powers, while her subsequent assumption of a maternal role to the other mutants she encountered gave her an interesting new opportunity to mature. Her reaction to her new mutant powers were also well-explored; the part where she speculated that she felt more comfortable as a mutant because it was PART of her rather than a mystical ‘destiny’ that she was forced to accept was particularly effective (Although Logan and Ororo’s prior experience with Slayers definitely helped her relationship with the X-Men).

The addition of Iron Man and his efforts to help Willow after her accident is another excellent touch, giving Willow a good chance to establish herself as a hero without going the easier route of making HER a mutant as well, even if the addition of her future self seemed a bit excessive; it added an interesting level of intensity to the current crisis, but a part of me feels that it might have been trying to add an extra layer to something that was deep enough...

Still, the complications caused by Esme’s death (Even if it’s only her own fault for attempting something that even Xavier wouldn’t have tried to do) were interesting, and the implications of Apocalypse’s presence had DFINITE potential (Even if you’re not going to follow up on it yourself).

Keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
Thank you for the very complete and all-round true review. Thank you for reflecting on my work and giving me useful feedback. I am grateful.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [12 Dec 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Facing the past" from WebSpyder
Review:
Excellent story! I'm sorry I'm done with it and wish you were going to continue. I've avoided a lot of the attempts to mix BtVS with supers just because I have a hard time seeing the fit, but you did an amazing job.
Comments from author:
Thanks and I have to admit I had done the same in the past hence my reason for trying. I am also a life long X-Men fan so I felt like I at least had to try. I also had to stop because I was running out of interest in continuing and my original idea for an ending was then adapted to the one posted here.
Review By [WebSpyder] • Date [1 Dec 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Facing the past" from Dapsy
Review:
You know.. I did not even realize I finished the entire story... all 122k+ words or so... in one day. Really... really fantastic stuff. Amazing. Loved all of it. I award you with my personal Order of Greatness!!!

I am sure I will return to read it again,... sooner or later :D It was just so great. ^_^
Comments from author:
Thank you, you're too kind.
Review By [Dapsy] • Date [29 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Facing the past" from PATM
Review:
Fantastic! I'm sorry you finished but it was a resolution I was hoping for. Willow was the only one who could work out the details. Fear of the stranger and it's resulting hate is well represented here. Overall very satisfying and a fun read.
Comments from author:
Good to know. Thanks for the review.
Review By [PATM] • Date [29 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Facing the past" from Gideon
Review:
Nice work. That was a worthy ending to a story of epic scope. Though I am sad to see it end I know they will all have many exciting adventures in the future and maybe someone will write a story that will be as good as the one you have here.
Comments from author:
Many have and probably will, but I am glad you liked it.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [29 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Facing the past" from (Past Donor)JoeHundredaire
Review:
Could have used a thorough beta-ing to translate it from Google Translate English into Actual Human English, but otherwise not bad.
Comments from author:
I don't have a beta available. And this was posted both unbeta'ed and unread even by me except for a once over when I was done. But you're a bit harsh as usual in your way of saying it, but I expect nothing else from you.
Review By [(Past Donor)JoeHundredaire] • Date [28 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Facing the past" from Iceflame
Review:
Hey, It's a good ending. Not perfect, but then LIFE definitely not perfect. Well Done!!
Comments from author:
I kind of wanted it to end in an open ended way as most comics continually do.
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [28 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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