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Harry Potter: Rise of The Iron Magius Supremus

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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Bluesnowman
Review:
great stuff
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from SpiralMemory
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Another wonderful and imaginative story. I have only one complaint...needs more updates! Same with the Xander Harris: The Iron Tau’ri story...~sigh~ anyways, looking forward to more:) Great work!
Review By [SpiralMemory] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great story, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Obsidian
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AWESOME chapter, thanks, Looking forward to more.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Tjin
Review:
I'm very glad this has been continued, just one request, please don't go the whole 'Dumbledor is a bumbling idiot trying to get everyone killed/asshole' route, that particular horse has been beaten into glue.

-Tjin
Comments from author:
HA! That will be the day before I adopt a similar formula..... to me, Albus is a Tactician who has slightly lost sight of what really matters... a pacifistic "manipulator" whose interest is in an outcome of lessened bloodshed, and to think of the "greater good" would make all the sacrifices everyone experienced along the way not in vain.... I assure that he won't be stupid..... maybe a bit cracked in some places due to his age, but never completely stupid. His only failure - I think - is that he does his damned best to try and see something/someone worth saving in his foes up to the last possible "human error". Like so many others, I won't go the whole Deathly Hallows route..... though the horcrux idea will stay since I am working out a reason why some magical arts can be viewed as dark/light/gray and how some can be misinterpreted and abused, etc.

PS thanks for the review :)
Review By [Tjin] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Past Donor)ridert
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I am loving both stories in this series and hope to see them updated sometime in the near future I especially look forward to seeing Al-bum Dumb-as-a-Door's first meeting with Demonbane. Sincerely hoping that you continue both of these great stories soon.
Review By [(Past Donor)ridert] • Date [24 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Tjin
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I love it, i do have one request. PLEASE Don't make Albus an incompetent Boob like so many do these days, that particular cliche has been done to death and just makes me groan and roll my eyes at the entire story when i run into one.

I hope you manage to continue this.

-Tjin
Comments from author:
Thanks, this one is coming along slowly.... its kinda hard to cut out the anime stuff while I researched on the mythological side of the Necronomicon.

As for Albus.... I may take a nod on RB's "Mr. Black" series on how I treat Dumbledore.... He's a good wizard who just lost his way because he kept thinking of the bigger picture and not the smaller one. I got the impression from the books that he had an end goal in sight.... but not a clear grasp of what mattered in between and simply forgot all about it until it was too late when he realized that he made a TON of mistakes by accident in pursuing the goal.
Review By [Tjin] • Date [12 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from grd
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This tale may actually make the often depressing Potterverse worth reading. Love how the AI expunged Voldy's shard from Harry. Wondering if Voldy felt anything too. Thank you and eager for more.
Review By [grd] • Date [1 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Karone
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I like. Please continue. :)
Review By [Karone] • Date [26 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from djhardim
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Followup to earlier note. According to Wikipedia, Ash studied engineering in college. I can see his family _strongly_ encouraging him to get a job that makes use of his education. Somehow, he lands a job at Xander's company, perhaps as a sales representative.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [24 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from RafMereC
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Very good.
Raf
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [23 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from grd
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And now another tale has become one of my favorites. Loving what you've done with Harry. Hope he meets Xander soon. Enjoyed what you did with old Moldy shorts.
Review By [grd] • Date [23 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from ChiVayne
Review:
Good story.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [22 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Dragonelf
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Yay, a new chapter.

You mean "your nemesis" and not "you nemesis", right?

::Gives the plot bunny some carrot stew::

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Comments from author:
thx for the review... :) and I fixed that pesky "you" typo, lol thanks again!
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [22 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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