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Harry Potter: Rise of The Iron Magius Supremus

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Review of chapter "Prologue" from PhilH
Review:
Great start. I thought that armor "looked" familiar. Please do continue this.
Review By [PhilH] • Date [20 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from eriktheviking
Review:
Definitely a teaser.

I would develop this separately for a while to develop the characters before combining with BtVS.

You know best.

Thanks
Comments from author:
I know what you mean, I aim to run this story slightly parallel to the main one before it completely crosses over.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [20 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Fyrloche
Review:
Interesting. Sounds like you could end up with your own 'Armour War' before it's over with.
Comments from author:
Yep, includes the Hero VS Hero over a mild misunderstanding before they team up to beat the bad guy formula that Marvel comics love to use a lot.
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [20 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from LNR
Review:
GO GO, GO!!!!!
Review By [LNR] • Date [20 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Coqui
Review:
It could be interesting. I like the idea so far. Good luck sorting out your real life stuff.
Review By [Coqui] • Date [20 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from TarlanTuffek
Review:
Great beginning!!!
After your RL is back on track...you have to sit down an continue!!!
Review By [TarlanTuffek] • Date [20 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from lrdtorquemada
Review:
Intriguing.. Get the RL stuff straight and yourself back to the right frame of mind. I enjoy your writing. However, RL must take priorty. Take care.
Review By [lrdtorquemada] • Date [20 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Hawkehunt
Review:
The idea has merit and it looks interesting. Whether I keep reading will depend on how it turns out, but I will be coming back for at least a couple more chapters if you keeo going.
Review By [Hawkehunt] • Date [20 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from LFW
Review:
Please continue
I did wonder about Xander knowing but not doing magic, so this is an excellent idea.
Looking forward to finding out what the armor looks like and what Luna and Hermione will make of it
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [20 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Ghostrider
Review:
Just make sure you do whatever you need to do to get things in your life back on track. That's more important then fic. We'll be here, waiting, so don't worry.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [20 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from MistofRainbows
Review:
Looks interesting. It could be interesting to see what mischief harry gets up to with power armor.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [20 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Bobboky
Review:
I like it
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [20 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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