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Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Finding Someone To Help" from spring
Review:
I love what you have so far please update again soon.
Comments from author:
thanks! the next chappie's finished but i just gotta get it typed up & edited. ill post it as soon as i can!
Review By [spring] • Date [21 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: What Buffy Needs To Do" from imokit
Review:
This is really good, I can't wait to read more!
Comments from author:
you're so kind!!!! *_*

the next chapter should hopefully be coming soon
Review By [imokit] • Date [30 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Finding Someone To Help" from Tempe
Review:
Looks good so far! I wonder if Angel will be coming back like he did in the show? Or maybe, Buffy can go rescue him in hell no that she has a free pass there with Leo's orbing. Update again, soon!
Review By [Tempe] • Date [22 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Finding Someone To Help" from littleoldme
Review:
I like this story a lot so far but have some formatting requests- on my computer, chapters two and three showed up in all italics, which is much harder to read than normal print- so if that's not just my computer, could you chill it with the italics? Also, since you're starting back before Buffy gives birth, all the information about what is going to happen is really disturbing, so the challenge or whatever that is at the beginning of each chapter takes a lot away from the story. So if you could change the italics and stop pasting that opening paragraph, I would be a happy reader.

The story itself is wonderful. I really loved chapter 3 and the Charmed Ones' realization that Buffy is a minor- hopefully, they won't let her leave pregnant and alone! More soon, I hope!
Comments from author:
sorry about the challenge details--guess it is kind of annoying. as for the italics - - that must just be your computer. All I have italicized on my is the To Be Continued's.

Glad you enjoyed it though. Chapter 4 should hopefully be coming soon.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [21 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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