I am really enjoying this story. I like how you have intergrated Buffy into the stargate universe and explained all of her abilities. Can't wait for the update!

I like this story a lot. The way you've integrated Buffy into Sam's family in a similar manner that Dawn was integrated into hers, was great. I cannot wait to see the next chapter.

Oh wow this is wonderful. I really really love what you have so far. I really love the fact that you made Buffy a genius and the way that you explained all of her differences is wonderful, you did an excellent job in that, in fact everything is excellent in this fic. I am very eager to read more of this wonderful fic.

Wow.. I really liked how you explained how Buffy got her "abilities".. although I'm not much of a buffy/faith shipper.. more of a daniel/buffy one.. I look forward to see how this will progress.

Nice beginning. Can't wait to see where you take this.

Seems like a good start and I do love a good B/F pairing. Can't wait to see more.

This looks really good so far, I hope you continue it soon.

Excellent fic so far! Looking forward to more.

This looks like it will be a great story.

In the Prologue, it's funny how one moment the PTBs are all snotty about Buffy, then the next, they admit she *does* deserve a reward, even though they aren't exactly going to give it to her.

I like all the little hints about the "New York gangster movie" accent, and Tara. The stuff about the electrical shocks was innovative. Looking forward to more, but don't overextend yourself with too many ongoing stories! :-)

Looks great so far! I love when Buffy is able to use that brain of hers so it should be interesting to see what else she can come up with before she gets caught. I wonder who's name she's suppose to call out when she remembers? I'm sort of ambivalent about the relationship set for this story, but I'm still looking forward to reading this. Hopefully that won't annoy you too much. You mentioned a Tara and also the caretakers last name was Maclay, does that have anything to do with the series Tara? Or is it just a coincidence? Well, I hope you update again soon!

I have read a lot of fics where Buffy is Sam sister but never one like this I was just wondering is Buffy Jacob blood daughter did the Powers change her DNA and will Jacob try and have a daughter relationship with Buffy because that seems weird that he would make up with his son but not his other daughter and can you tell me what season this is for Stargate?

thanks for noting that. I've gone back and addressed it. Will repost the chapter soon.

You have me intrigued.

I've seen several where Buffy is Carter's sister, but this is the first where buffy was inserted into sam's life much like Dawn was inserted in to Buffy's. The explanation for Buffy's slayer abilities seems quite well done considering your trying to have it make "scientific" sense.

I like the beginning.
I hope that the PTB get this time a big kick in their asses and not Whistler.
Never thought of Sam's father that way but I think Buffy its right.