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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from BSilverbow
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I love how long and detailed your chapters are. Will people recognize her in good 'ol Sunnydale? Will Faith and the gang be there? Will Janet and Sam see the obvious? Will my questions ever end? Most likely not...
Review By [BSilverbow] • Date [29 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BSilverbow
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...there are no words to express how awesome this story is. Having 'Elizabeth' as Sam's sister, but making their relationship almost mother/daughter is brilliant, going into detail about the whole 'electric-shock=super senses' was a nice touch and the fact that this already awesome story has all of my favourite pairings combined? I'm actually forcing myself to remain calm and not embarrass myself by squealing. I'm going to go read more now!
Review By [BSilverbow] • Date [29 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from ClumsyElf
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Great story!! Hope to see more soon!!

SARAH
Review By [ClumsyElf] • Date [3 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from serenityselena
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he needed a wake up call ...
hope to read more soon ^__^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [29 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from nightshadowlife
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awwww good, hopefully the old man will finally wise up and take responsibility for his kids!!!!!!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [23 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
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short but sweet. glad jacob is taking a bit of action in correcting his mistakes.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [15 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from caradens
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excellent update thanks
I look forward to more.
Review By [caradens] • Date [13 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from immortalsilence
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love it more pretty please and Happy New Year
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [5 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from (Current Donor)mmooch
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Oh yeah, nothing like driving the point home with a sledgehammer how much he screwed up with his youngest daughter. Wonder what'd it take to start over with her.
Comments from author:
good question
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [5 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from (Current Donor)Sithspit
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Yay, an update! *REJOICING*
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [5 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from wiper
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Yay, new chapter, thank you. Will be waiting for the next .o)
Review By [wiper] • Date [5 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from kayron
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That is the best explanation of the PTB that I've ever heard. "The PTB are all about balance, not fairness". Sometimes it seems to me that they weigh things in favor of the bad side to keep their balance.
Review By [kayron] • Date [24 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from deathgeonous
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Nice fic here. I'm looking forward to more. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [3 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from lucyferr
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The look on her then-expressive face had made it blatantly clear that, even if he sent the baby away without her knowledge, the young genius would use every skill she possessed to track her sister down, no matter what it took.

i like the phrase THEN-expressive. sums it up, huh?

“Why does it have to be you?” Jacob finally asked, drawing everyone’s attention.
“Like you care.” Jordan snorted disdainfully. “You haven’t given a shit about Eli since she was a baby, and now you’re acting all dad-like. Gimme a break.”
Jacob bristled at the blatant derision in her voice. That was one of the things he disliked most about his daughter’s ‘girlfriend’. She had absolutely no respect. What was worse, was that he knew that her disrespect was only for him, and not for elders or authority figures in general.

good scene, this... hope Jacob slinks off into the sunset. Also, wonder how many of the military personnel watching - esp those higher up the chain - are going to treat their families better for the next, oh, week.

"So, basically what you're saying is that this Faith girl fucked up, and you're paying for it?" Jack asked bluntly. "How is that fair?"
"The Powers are all about Balance, Jack," Eli told him, "not fairness."

ouch, deep
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from lucyferr
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A girl she would have never been caught dead consorting with, but she had forgotten something in her gym locker and returned to the locker room after gym class where the girl had hung back to shower and change alone, and she'd seen the mottled bruises that had covered the entire length of her back. A little research and an anonymous phone call from the payphone at one of their hangouts had resulted in the police catching the girl's alcoholic father red-handed beating the daylights out of her as she'd tried to shield her mother.
She, as Buffy, had always thought that her being Called had been some sort of cosmic fluke, but maybe whatever it was that chose the next Slayer had seen something in her that she, herself, had never even suspected until she had been Called.

Okay now *that*'s a seriously good story (is it canon? hope not)

"I find that I must confess my confusion." He spoke in English. "You have made no attempt to be a part of the Champion's life since shortly after her birth, but you still feel that you have the right to make parental demands?"

good one!

"...however, the continued withdrawal during her growing years was unacceptable. As such, we acknowledge only the concerns of those who have taken active part in the growth of the Champions."
There was complete and utter silence. Everyone, with the exception of the Teal’c and the Champions in question, were shocked and a little dumbstruck. While none of them had approved of Jacob’s treatment of Elizabeth, no one had even thought to keep him out of the loop of anything concerning his daughter.

isnt it fun when the higherups do something cool? might even turn someone religious ;-)
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
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