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Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from lucyferr
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"Which, by the way, was serious overkill. I know that those people were probably just a really small blip in your 'big picture', but the total eradication of an entire race was way over the top. Most of those people probably didn't even know that the weapon existed. I mean, 98% of the people on this entire planet don't even know that the Stargate exists or that there's life outside of this world. You can't condemn the whole for the actions of a few."
"That was not our doing." The woman denied.
"Maybe not, but they did it because they were terrified of what you would do."

hmmm - don't mention the invasion, don't mention the invasion, don't mention invading the wrong country

Higher beings can't explain their rules to their own Champions, but apparently, they can explain someone else's rules. Loopholes, you gotta love 'em.

quite

His expression had turned thunderous and he was grinding his teeth in rage.
"Jack, don't!" Elizabeth said, almost imploringly. "Nothing you say is going to change what's about to happen, and these aren't the pacifists that you've dealt with. Your opinion doesn't matter to them. They'll do what they feel they need to, regardless of how you feel about it, and their solutions to problems tend to be extreme and permanent. If you irritate them, you could be gone forever with barely a thought."

Oooh that could be fun - Jack is a bit of a jock bully, and it's always fun to watch when those types meet bullies bigger than them. Watching from a safe distance, mind.
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from lucyferr
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Sam was aghast to see how shy and repressed Tara could have been if Diana hadn't left her husband the first time he'd hit her.

differences, yep

Then, to top it off, they had Mayor Wilkins send Finch to that alley that night, knowing that Faith is a 'strike first, realize that you should have asked questions only when it comes back to bite you in the ass' type of fighter."

that explains a lot

Daniel blushed and tried to look away, but hey, it was two hot girls kissing and, despite the brotherly affection that he felt for them, neither were related to him by blood

lol

stepped into Jordan's personal space and kissed her hard.

does that wake Faith up? ah, not quite at once

"Faith had problems, and she needed help, but I, when I was Buffy, was too wrapped up in my own drama to see it.

sounds about right

"So, how does it feel to be the same height as normal people?"

lol
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from lucyferr
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"Where is the military in this 'dimension'?" Jack demanded, still not satisfied.
...."In other words, Jack," Elizabeth interrupted. "Professor Walsh created a walking, talking sociopathic nuclear bomb, that ended up killing her and about 40% of their personnel in an attempt to create more like him. That's what the military did when they found out."
Jack sat down, not really having anything to counter that.

lol@ jack ... interesting that he accepts things without question - in the sense that he doesnt try to defend the military by dismissing Walsh et al as rogues. He does get the 'power corrupts' dictum, at least at times.

Wish you hadn't renamed Faith as Jordan.
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from lucyferr
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Liz vs Simmons is highly popcorn-worthy
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Bobboky
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good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from nightshadowlife
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woah awesome chapter!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [5 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from caradens
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excellent story eagerly awaiting more brilliant updates thanks
Review By [caradens] • Date [4 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from immortalsilence
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ooooohhh love it more pretty please
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
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hmm..interesteing to hear jacob's thoughts but he is still coming at them high and mighty oh well... Will Ellie and Jordon be going alone? If so I wonder what will happen if she goes through the stargate again or similar experience....Keep up the great work
Comments from author:
they're going to fix that as part of the evolution upgrade, but I haven't figured out just how yet.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from FireWolfe
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Poor Jack when did he think life was fair? Great update.
Comments from author:
well, in his defense, he's dealt with foreign powers and alien powers, but never Higher Powers. (Ancients count as aliens)
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from SmithAndWesson
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Great to see an update, hey and only a little less than a year since the last one. Hopefully we can get these on a shorter interval.
Comments from author:
talk to Real Life. It's all his fault.
Review By [SmithAndWesson] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from swtmaliegirl
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I'm really hoping for an update! This is an awesome story and I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it.
Review By [swtmaliegirl] • Date [14 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Raider
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i must admit, this chapter has raised my expectations a bit.

the idea of the protectorate makes alot of sense, too.
Review By [Raider] • Date [6 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from spk
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Just re-reading this amazing & unique story and hoping for more. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [22 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from TwoBlackDragons
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Evil author = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a terrific story, so please stop being one of the evilest of authors.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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