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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TheDon
Review:
interesting. if xander builds himself a team i hope you make xander more skilled, maybe bring back those soldier skills or somethin. even just having the enhanced smell, sight, hearing, taste, and danger sense of the hyena would be hella useful. anyways i hope you update soon

-The Don
Comments from author:
It's not so much that Xander builds a team, it is more like Xander meets people, and the team sort of builds itself.

I will say that Xander will get more skills, and sooner than he did in canon, but for the most part those will be skills that he builds himself rather than skills he magically obtained.

As for updating, I need to make one last read of chapter two, then hopefully I will post it before I go offline tonight.
Review By [TheDon] • Date [25 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ChaosRonin
Review:
Intresting Plot, cant wait to see what you do with this, or how The HP influence will come in.
Comments from author:
Glad to know you found the first chapter interesting. As for Harry Potter, he'll appear in the very next chapter, but I should probably warn that the Harry in this fanfic will be an AU Harry (because some of this Harry's story is a bit different from canon). Hopefully that will be balanced by the CSI characters who will (or should) behave as their canon selves completely, because while I am changing quite a bit of Potter canon (though mostly just Book Seven) I won't be changing any of the pre-season eight CSI canon, and even in season eight there's only one little detail at the end that will be changed.
Review By [ChaosRonin] • Date [24 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)plutofigaro
Review:
hi,

I like it so. Sounds like Xan will have a little trouble at the club with the dancers. Who will he meet first Greg or Nick?
Comments from author:
Glad you liked, but you may be a bit disappointed with the answer to who Xander meets first, because Xander won't actually be meeting Greg or Nick, sorry, but it is two other CSIs who'll have parts here.
Review By [(Past Donor)plutofigaro] • Date [24 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TheatricalBarrister
Review:
Nice start, thanks for posting it. It made me laugh, it made me cry… well, at least it made me laugh. I like Xander's postcards.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing. I'm glad to hear that you liked the postcards, I wasn't sure if they really felt like something Xander would write.
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [23 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MegKF
Review:
I really like your story so far and can't wait to see how you integrate CSI AND Harry Potter into it.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like what's there so far, and I hope you'll continue to enjoy.

However, the Harry Potter that appears in this fanfic is very different from the canon Harry Potter, though I do hope people will enjoy it anyway. On the other hand, hopefully the CSIs that appear will feel like their canon selves.
Review By [MegKF] • Date [23 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Interesting take on the summer road-trip. Looking forward to seeing how you develop the story.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading and leaving a review - I hope you'll find the rest of the story interesting.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [23 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Interesting take on Xander's Summer Trip. Nice job with Xander's character also. I can't wait for the adventures to begin. Lol!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked the way I've set up Xander's character, I wasn't sure if it would feel original, because stipper!Xander has been done before. However, being a stripper will be a key aspect of Xander's character over the course of this fanfic (and Season Two, if I decide to go there), and a "normal" point that Xander and Catherine could bond over. Which is actually a bit strange considering the fact that we won't really see him stripping, because I just don't think I have the mad skillz to do justice writing a strip scene.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [23 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AonGealach
Review:
This has some definite potential! I am looking foward to the next bit!!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you feel that way, hopefully chapter two will not disappoint.
Review By [AonGealach] • Date [23 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Marcel
Review:
Hmm... to early to tell anything. Good start though, and because the first chapter is a bit drawn-out it creates an impression of a disaster waiting to happen :)
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading and leaving a review. As for chapter one, it does at that doesn't it? I didn't really do it on purpose, I was basically just trying to get all the pre-story/backstory stuff out of the way in one go, because chapter two will see the first person joining Xander's team, even though there isn't an actual team yet.
Review By [Marcel] • Date [23 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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