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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Interesting. I like Ziva as big sis.

But the whole Hank being bodyguard & not Dad... secrets are one thing

However the Watchers Council have their fingers in too many pies not to know Buffy's parentage once she was identified as the Slayer. They would have checked & checked DEEP.
Magic can do things that computer security can't counter. The WC are sneaky shits.

Waiting for the explaination.
Comments from author:
Travers might know. Doesn't mean Giles does, as you said, the WC are sneaky shits. A good point, and one I was actually pondering, so glad you liked it, thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ranlynn
Review:
I can see Ziva being Buffy's sister and that 'papa' David has kept that knowledge to himself until now (master manipulator that he is).

But for some reason *Buffy* being aware of the connection or being in contact with 'papa' isn't ringing true.

I will wait & see what you do with it though.
Comments from author:
He wanted an American daughter. It wouldn't do him any good if she was *just* an american, though. He needs her to be able to do the things he will require of her, which means he has to train her. Anyway, glad youliked it, thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
Review By [ranlynn] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)LiastraLee
Review:
I could really get into this.
Review By [(Past Donor)LiastraLee] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)sopchoppy
Review:
Very Intriguing. I hope you continue this
Review By [(Past Donor)sopchoppy] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Capricorn
Review:
Interesting concept. Given the number of times we see Buffy being a nitwit and/or accomplished you'd have quite a bit to work with.

If you keep going I'll keep reading.
Review By [Capricorn] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from rgsunny
Review:
Oh woah!

I'm totally interested in what happens next!
Please keep it up!

:)
Review By [rgsunny] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from anouk
Review:
Wow, nice beginning :D Great idea, too. I'm definitely tracking this.
Review By [anouk] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gargoylesama
Review:
I am not one to track non-Xander stories, but do like NCIS. I am interested to see where this goes from here.
Quick question about the altered time frame. Is Buffy time bumped up, or is NCIS bumped back? No real reason to know why, but helps put the series in a frame work for the story in my head.
Comments from author:
Buffy's bumped up; this takes place end of season one events, and I haven't entirely decided when in NCIS, but buffy is the one that's moving. hope that helps, glad you liked it, thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
Review By [Gargoylesama] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Promethea
Review:
I think its an awesome new idea! You're off to a good start!
Review By [Promethea] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Amai
Review:
Okay, don't throw this into the bin of rabid ideas. Instead, consider a more radical approach. LIke... updating?
Comments from author:
I'll do my best. Radical, huh? glad you liked it, thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
Review By [Amai] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Claddagh
Review:
I like this! I really, really like this. I look forward to so many things............. Ziva trying to be a big sister to an American teenager. Giles' freaking out when he realizes how many languages Buffy speaks. Buffy and Abby together, I bet they will be great friends. Please, please, please continue?!?
Review By [Claddagh] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kiwi
Review:
interesting start.
Review By [kiwi] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kittenpoker
Review:
I like it! No kicking this into the garbage bin! Tony hasn't gotten into trouble, Angel hasn't found out, and I would love to see how the Scooby Gang will react to this!! Please continue .... and doesn't Buffy have trouble with French in school? It would have been so funny for her to be completely fluent but trying to fail it :)
Review By [kittenpoker] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KnightWulf
Review:
well this is new but what i've read so far is very good, wonder if buffy will tell giles and the gang eventualy. hope to read more soon
Review By [KnightWulf] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Aeryn
Review:
Intersting so far,need another chapter before deciding about it.
Review By [Aeryn] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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