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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from VillageOrchid
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Oh, crap. What will they do with Willow's body? And if they do put it in the mystery machine.. what happens when the spell breaks.. and is any one in the mystery machine? I was almost hoping that the paint on Buffy would make her Daphne dressed in a costume. Or will characters come barolling out of the mysteyr machine? Thanks for sharing and not allowing us to know exactly what will happen next!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [1 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Ben
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I thought the Mystery Machine was a same model year Dodge Sportvan.
Review By [Ben] • Date [1 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Fyrloche
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I actually thought it was going to be the box that Scrappy showed up in.
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [1 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from SamDragon
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I admit it.The Mystery machine was not even in my list.Now to find out what will happen when the spell hits.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [30 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from VillageOrchid
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Well, I guessed on the box, and the description of the story. I'm wondering if that paint streak will have any effect on Buffy's memory, though... and if Willow got some paint... would she turn into a Scoobie Doo style fake ghost -- that is no change??? Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
Not quite. Check this from the story: She heaved a sigh of relief at finding nothing wrong, and then she glared at her smirking friend. “You could have told me that before I almost lost my costume deposit!”

Buffy didn't get any paint on herself.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from TheatricalBarrister
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Hmm, I was half-joking when I guessed his costume. You did a great job of describing it, I had trouble imagining how he could pull it off. Looking forward to more.
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [30 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from CPTSkip
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You surprised me. I can't wait to see how Xander/Mistery Machine make it through Helloween. Dang, it would have been cool if Willow could have gone as Velma. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [30 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from purrfus
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I thought, but then no because I couldn't visualize it. Your description made the Mystery Machine come to life.

Can't wait to see the aftermath.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [30 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Past Donor)ridert
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I thought everyone knew that the Mystery Machine was the real sixth member of the Scooby team
Review By [(Past Donor)ridert] • Date [30 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from eriktheviking
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Very original, well done.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [30 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TheatricalBarrister
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My guess is he's going as the Mystery Machine. It'll be great--Willow, Cordy, and Buffy can hop in, and he can drive them around town, keeping them out of danger and running down any vamps they cross!
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [29 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
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OK, your story's beginning caught my interest and you made me laugh out loud several times. Xander's mental image of Angel and Larry french kissing amused me for some perverted reason. I hope you continue this story as I am dying to see what Xander's costume is going to be.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [29 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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