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Review of chapter "Written in the wind" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
I just love this I really do, I'm not just saying that. It really brightened up my Saturday afternoon.

I like the way this story is bouncing along from location to another, and now I've got the non-BtVS characters firmly in my head there's no confusion anymore about who's who.

Really like the off subject banter too, very good.

Looking forward to your next update.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [11 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Forever Spring" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Gives the plot bunny some carrot pecan pie::

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Remember tonight... for it is the beginning of always.
- Dante Alighieri
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Comments from author:
pecan... that's a nut right? Sounds yummy.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [1 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The eve of the war cont." from (Current Donor)Speakertocustomers
Review:
The Isle of Man is not part of the United Kingdom. We are a Crown Protectorate with the same status as, for example, Montserrat - we're just close enough to the UK to be able to see it on the horizon, instead of being in the Caribbean, and we don't have any active volcanoes. I suggest that you change the header of that section to 'Isle of Man, British Isles'.
Comments from author:
Goodness Speakertocustomers you are only the second Manxer I've ever had anything to do with.

I apologise for getting this fact wrong and have changed it.

I suppose then if I ever do a cross with 'boy eats girl' I have one guaranteed reader with you.
Review By [(Current Donor)Speakertocustomers] • Date [1 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Forever Spring" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
OK still confused but I can feel clarity coming....by the way is Willow bad Willow again?
Comments from author:
Well she's not vieny Willow because she doesn't want to destroy the world she just wants Kennedy back.
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [1 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The eve of the war cont." from TheatricalBarrister
Review:
> Kennedy was already taking a marker pen out of her coat pocket and frantically scrawling protection sigils on the walls.

As an amusing point of interest, a well-known brand of marker pens in the US is Magic Marker.
Comments from author:
that's good because I was hoping that markers were called markers in the US as opposed to vivids, felts or textas.

I wonder why it's called Magic? Does it wipe off wallpaper easily?
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [1 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Forever Spring" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
I see you're mixing in Jeff Wayne (Forever Spring), H.G.Wells (Green meteors) as well as the recent film, and why not? All makes for a interesting story.

On to part Four!

All the best,
DaveT.
Comments from author:
I'm going to follow the book's uk timeline,

except in both the book and tc movie the invasion happened in autumn not spring, but because of time line of 'love actually' I needed to change it to spring.

I love 'Forever Autumn' would make a good funeral song come to think of it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [1 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The eve of the war cont." from Dragonelf
Review:
::Gives the plot bunny some chocolate carrot quiche::

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Remember tonight... for it is the beginning of always.
- Dante Alighieri
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Comments from author:
chocolate carrot quiche, ugh.

Otherwise thanks for the encoragement
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [30 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The eve of the war cont." from MountainWilliam
Review:
Good start! You made me chuckle quite a bit. (I suspect I'd have laughed more, but it's been a while since I saw "Love, Actually".)

Please, do continue.
Comments from author:
thank you very much for your encouragement, I wondered how many love actually fans were out there
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [29 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The eve of the war cont." from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Just checked its 'Isle of Man' one 'n'!

Loved the bar scene in Rio, Riley downing Pena Colardas (or however you spell it) just cracked me up for some reason; he's always struck me as more of a beer man.

Anyway looking forward to part three...now I'm going to look up 'Love Actually' on IMDB.

DaveT.
Comments from author:
thank you for the spelling tip, you were right,
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [29 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "On the eve of war" from lindiel
Review:
***GIGGLES**** Doug Mackenzie of Hosers being PM of Canada...Heck, he'd probably be just as good if not better than the gowzers we've got to choose from now (If you're Canadian and reading the reviews like I do, go vote on October 14, pick the least loseriest of the losers, say the Pink Rhino party or the Whores Popular Party - I kid you not, this is a real Federal Party in Canada, see: http://www.altstuff.com/federal.htm)

Can't wait for the next part, I wonder who the friends in London are, who they're getting married to and how they connect with the Brit PM...
Comments from author:
New Zealand's having an election this year too, in November. Commonwealth coincidence?

Everyone connects with each other in War of the Worlds actually.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [lindiel] • Date [29 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "On the eve of war" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
I loved Hugh Grant's Prime Minister....and I am looking forward to seeing where you take the story I will have to go back and review Love Actually and War of the Worlds with Tom Cruise....definitely intrigued!
Comments from author:
thank you very much for your positive encouraging review,

Hugh grant finally got to play someone not a twitwit in LA
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [29 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "On the eve of war" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Interesting if slightly confusing (having never seen 'Love Actually') start...looking forward to more.

DaveT.
Comments from author:
A bit of a worry if you find it confusing, I would hope you didn't need to see Love Actually to follow the plot

Maybe when the demon aliens come and the deaths come....

The same actress played Sam Finn and Stacey from Milwaukee and I thought to get around this problem I'll have them be twin sisters.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [29 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "On the eve of war" from Dragonelf
Review:
I am looking forward to see where your plot bunny will lead you.

::Gives the plot bunny some chocolate carrot cake::

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If you are planning for a year, sow rice;
if you are planning for a decade, plant trees;
if you are planning for a lifetime, educate people.
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Comments from author:
Thank you very much for your instant encouraging fun review, especially when I hadn't posted anything for a long time.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [29 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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