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Dungeon Monk Xander Origin

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Review of chapter "Chapter 1: The DM and the Charmed Ones" from Thedruid
Review:
Interesting start on this one, with lots of possbaltis.

Though I am greatly looking forward to more of the Forbidden Seals story!
Comments from author:
Thank you ^_^ I'll be working on Forbidden Seals over the weekend, so most probably give me one more week.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [7 Oct 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: The DM and the Charmed Ones" from anpu
Review:
Thank you. I love your stories. Please continue all of them.
Comments from author:
I'll thanks tabby!
Review By [anpu] • Date [7 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: The DM and the Charmed Ones" from Richardthrnnsx
Review:
OK this came out of left field. The Charmed cross is unique and unexpected. Much fun and looking forward to seeing where you take this. I'm also enjoying your other fic "Master", you seem to have a different view of BtVS xovers which is fun.

Thanks for sharing Richard3116
Comments from author:
Nice to see you here :D Yeah stories are meant to be fun (for me that is :p) I'll work on Forbidden Seals next. Thanks for the review!
Review By [Richardthrnnsx] • Date [3 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: The DM and the Charmed Ones" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
“At least her powers are cool, and she was a very good appraiser of antiques and art.”
--Sweet, he could get a job with Joyce... Probably doesn't need to though, seeing as how they're rich.

He is *so* getting tranqued and kidnapped by the Initiative, though they likely won't be able to hold him once he wakes up...

Fic was... You repeated explanations a bit much. Might be better off condensing it and varying the tone...

I liked how his being late for the costume shop meant that he missed walking the girls to school and made everyone's starting positions different. Well done :)
Comments from author:
^_^" yeah I noticed the hammering of explanations as well. Cause I was not sure if I explained the concept of Xander's dungeon monk powers clearly enough.

Thanks for pointing out to me. Appreciate it!

And double thanks for the review!
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: The DM and the Charmed Ones" from OdinMage
Review:
I LOVE super Xander, that said, I really like this. Having said that though, both this and your Master of the Forbidden Seals story NEED betas.

Keep writing!
Comments from author:
^_^ thanks! I'm trying to find beta for Dungeon Monk Xander. If you know anyone interested can let me know.
Review By [OdinMage] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: The DM and the Charmed Ones" from Dragonelf
Review:
This new tale sounds quite promising right now.

::Gives the plot bunny some carrot pecan pie::

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Life... is like a grapefruit. It's orange and
squishy, and has a few pips in it, and some
folks have half a one for breakfast.
- Douglas Adams
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Comments from author:
Let me guess a crossover with the 'Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy'? :p Maybe I could throw in one of the spaceships from there, have the scoobies find it in one of the dungeons. ^_^ thanks for your plot bunny!
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: The DM and the Charmed Ones" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Nice setup. I'd say the monsters were higher level than he expected because he created the world from on top of the Hellmouth!
Comments from author:
that's right! I'm going to throw Xander and gang into all kinds of hare brianed dungeon crawls :) writing the next part.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: The DM and the Charmed Ones" from Bobboky
Review:
cool work
Comments from author:
thanks! bobboky!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: The DM and the Charmed Ones" from SamDragon
Review:
Nice.Anya would freak.
Comments from author:
That's right! I am still planning how to include her into the story. :)
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: The DM and the Charmed Ones" from misterq
Review:
Dungeon crawler x-overs are both rare and interesting! I do hope you update this fic as well. Great job! (feeds the plot rabbits!)
Comments from author:
I like dungeon crawler fics too! I actually read two dungeon crawler fics on Naruto cross with Disgaea which were what actually started me on this fic. And thank you for the review!
Review By [misterq] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: The DM and the Charmed Ones" from war
Review:
good story hope you continue.
Comments from author:
will do :) stay tuned!
Review By [war] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: The DM and the Charmed Ones" from Mordre
Review:
Can it be those rabbits that Anyanka are so terribly afraid of?
Comments from author:
;) could be, she never specified what reality they are from did she?
Review By [Mordre] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: The DM and the Charmed Ones" from Mystikal
Review:
This is a killer story man. I think you should look into having Xander merge with the other soul pieces that were shown at the start later in the story like maybe in chapter 3. I would really love to see more of this story.
Comments from author:
Xander with more soul merge is on the way ^_^ that's the reason for twenty plus tattoos. Thank you for the review and suggestion Mystikal! Cheers!
Review By [Mystikal] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: The DM and the Charmed Ones" from IAMZIPPY
Review:
looks like a great beginning "dosen't mean i don't want another chapter of master of the forbidden seals though :) "
Comments from author:
IAMZIPPY hello! nice to see you here ^_^o The new chapter of Master of Forbidden Seals is about 50% done, working on it as well. Thanks for the review!
Review By [IAMZIPPY] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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