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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Intriguing concept, I have to admit; I am DEFINITELY interested to see where THIS is going.

Just one question; if Bella can read and influence minds HERSELF, does that mean that Edward won't be able to read hers, or will it just be some kind of 'feedback' effect that stops either of them making out anything (Like in "Heroes", when Peter Petrelli and Matt Parkman tried to read each other's minds and ended up giving themselves headaches)?

Well, that query aside, keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
I have started the next chapter, however i have no idea when it will be posted. Bella's ability will be the reason why Edward cannot read her mind but Bella will be able to read his thoughts...but they will be fuzzy to her. Kinda like she gets some thoughts but not all because of his ability which is not as strong as hers, otherwise he would be able to block her.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [30 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from alexceasar
Review:
very interesting story so far. I look forward to reading more. Good job.
Review By [alexceasar] • Date [20 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from blitzgrl
Review:
This is awesome as usuals! Please update it soon!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Though it would kinda be awkward when the Cullens family knows her secret sooner or later...oh well the dramatic!

Definitely can't wait until Cole appears when Edward asks Bella out....here comes Balthazar~~!
Comments from author:
Thanks, and yes the Cullen's will find out...im still not quite sure when though...
Review By [blitzgrl] • Date [12 Dec 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AllenPitt
Review:
gee, poor innocent Edward won't know what hit him...
Comments from author:
Well Bella will act like the Bella we know...but aspects of her true self will begin to show through.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [4 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AllenPitt
Review:
interesting premise. Poor Edward & company. Even more fun, if she hears about what's happening with Cole & the Charmed Ones, she might just head over there to help him out or get revenge or the like...
if you want to get weird: maybe Phoebe didn't lose their baby, just had her memories altered, and she's got him....
Comments from author:
I am looking forward to writing her ineractions with people in Forks...since her actions will be very different from her thoughts...

I do like Phoebe and Cole but i dont think that they will play a big part...however your idea about the baby gives me an idea...-ponders-

Thanks for the comment!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [5 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DemonChildeKyra
Review:
I like it so far! Definitely an interesting concept! I can't wait to see what happens when she gets to Forks!

~ Kyra
Comments from author:
The next chapter i have got planned, this will be her preparing to leave and end with her arriving at Forks High School...Thanks for the comment!
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [5 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from roxy
Review:
i really like this idea...can't wait to read more update soon please!!
PS love the song lol
Comments from author:
Thank you, updating may take a while because this story is not my main focus at the moment, i posted it to start getting some feedback to see how people liked the idea...though i will make sure that i update at least once this month, hopefully...
Review By [roxy] • Date [5 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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