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Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Eight" from thales
Review:
Very interesting story!

Giles as a Dragon.. i have never seen that.. but he fits into his new skin perfectly

Keep up the good work!
Review By [thales] • Date [17 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Eight" from dandylion
Review:
I don't think I've quite liked any story so much as this in a long time. It's truly wonderful. Thank you, and please continue on. ^_^
Review By [dandylion] • Date [17 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Eight" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
I look forward to the next in this wonderful story you have created. Such vividness and imagination you have as an Author and DM. Beautiful work yo are doing here and how you wrote Giles thoughts this chapter was truly outstanding!

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [17 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Eight" from ArjaiH
Review:
I so love this tale! I truly cannot wait for more of it. Write soon.
Review By [ArjaiH] • Date [17 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Seven" from grd
Review:
I hope Giles is at least able to shapeshift into looking mortal. It would help in traveling around. Loving this slowly progressing tale. Love the comparison that Willow made with the D&D Scoobies.
Review By [grd] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Seven" from DaBear
Review:
So far this is a GREAT story! Really enjoy it, but I do not recognize the world that it is based in. Then again I would be the first to not know all the various worlds based on DnD.
Review By [DaBear] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Seven" from speakerforthesilent
Review:
Another good chapter. Just one question, though.

Is this going to turn into a G/W fic? Not that it'd be *bad* or anything, but I'm curious.
Comments from author:
Probably not in the way that you're thinking it might ...
Review By [speakerforthesilent] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Seven" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Oh splendidly done! Just love Willow and Giles interacting and how you did Willow's internal dialog.


Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Seven" from JoeDineen
Review:
Love the Willow Giles interaction and want more.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Seven" from pcody
Review:
A fantastic setting for a very original story. The latest chapter lacks some of the vivid imagery that has defined this story to-date, but overall the story is a 10 out of 10.
Review By [pcody] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Seven" from arkeus
Review:
Still bloody awesome. You really have a nice characterization going on!

I wonder, or you going to merge the chapters later on?
Comments from author:
Well, I have a suspicion this is going to turn out to be at least novel length, so I'm pondering whether to post each chapter as a story in the series, rather than just go on adding sections ad infinitum. But over 20,000 words is a lot to pull together into a single post, so if I do I'll probably leave each chapter in sections ... Not sure yet.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Six" from banner
Review:
This looks terrific. It's setting up as the one of the best D&D crossovers I've ever read. I do wonder what is happening back home, and I hope that the three idiots who *stole* Andrew's books and then used them are thoroughly punished.
Poor Xander and Buffy: they must be wild with grief.
Comments from author:
I have plans to get back to Xander and Buffy at some point - but not just yet.

The gamers have learnt a very salutary lesson about taking source books seriously. And Andrew? Will never, ever forgive himself ...
Review By [banner] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Six" from speakerforthesilent
Review:
Another great chapter! Is Willow's ability to remember spells a characteristic that she attained through her transformation, or something she brought with her from her native reality, and either way, will Giles share it? Another great chapter. Thanks for writing!

Waiting impatiently for the next installment! :)
Comments from author:
The dragons and dragon-kin in my world are sorcerers, rather than mages, so some of it comes with the makeover - but the two of them have also brought a great deal of experience and knowledge with them, which helps. There are abilities they both have that have yet to be revealed ...
Review By [speakerforthesilent] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Six" from grd
Review:
Looking forward to Willow surprising her teachers. Eager to see her cast lightning or fireballs at will. What Giles will do, I'm sure will surprise them even more. This tale is growing on me. Thank you.
Review By [grd] • Date [15 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Six" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Simply wonderful story you have here. Just love how descriptive and vivid your writing is and the people... mind blowing!

Can't wait for more!

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [15 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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