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The Son of the Gods

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Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Bobboky
Review:
very nice, I hope that Xander begins forging more things. Bangles for Willow, a spear or axe for Buffy, a guitar of doom for Oz, and a nifty pistol or crossbow for Giles.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from eriktheviking
Review:
An interesting story well written.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Bruneor
Review:
Very nice, please continue.
Review By [Bruneor] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Fyrloche
Review:
Not bad. Pretty good storyline and a fairly original plotline. I've seen Xander as one of the God's chosen or child but not as Hepheastus' before. One observation - too many quotation marks. You don't need quotation marks for every sentence of spoken dialogue. Use them at the beginning of the spoken passage and at the end of the completed passage, unless you use a break in the middle of the sentence to describe an action. (Example: "You know," he paused for effect, "that just might work.") Otherwise, keep up the good work. Hint: If you've got an old English handbook, keep it handy. There are times that you can use it to improve your writing skills. And, if all else fails, you can use it to hit the computer with if it goes wonky!
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from wargear
Review:
So tell me, just how does this story qualify as a crossover?

A brief mention of Kevin Sorbo does not make it a Hercules crossover.

Seriously.

Otherwise, nice story.
Review By [wargear] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Great story so far you really should continue it.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Son of the Gods" from Ahdamnit
Review:
What's a Scobby? To my knowledge there's only one b in Scooby.

Not bad, but no where near complete. As you left it I don't really see a point to anything. I'm hoping that this is headed someplace.
Review By [Ahdamnit] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Excellent
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
Xander as the son of Hephaestus and Aphrodite is a wonderful idea. It almost seems as if Aphrodite was compelled to give up Xander as she herself didn't understand why she'd done so. I hope to read more of this story in a sequel.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Son of the Gods" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
This Story demands a sequel. Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I Mean wow, You really brought something new to the table. I really look forward to where you can go with this tale. A Reconciliation with both of his parents would be great.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from purrfus
Review:
Cute, and fun to read. I'm glad there's more on the way cause it went by so fast.

The extra quotation marks are a bit distracting. As a rule if one person is speaking several sentences worth of dialog then its only necessary to use the marks at the beginning of the first sentence and then again at the end of the last sentence.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [15 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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