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Review of chapter "Part 2: In Which There is a One-Eyed Gunslinger" from Caliadragon
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LOL! This is hilarious and I can't wait to see Xander deal with the Torchwood group.


Thanks
Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [8 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 2: In Which There is a One-Eyed Gunslinger" from Almadynis
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*laughing* Please keep going, this is really funny!
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [20 Oct 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 2: In Which There is a One-Eyed Gunslinger" from danyaelofazkaban
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This is really interesting and I'm looking forward to more
Review By [danyaelofazkaban] • Date [20 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 2: In Which There is a One-Eyed Gunslinger" from VillageOrchid
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An interesting set-up. Looking forward to seeing where you might take it. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [19 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 2: In Which There is a One-Eyed Gunslinger" from bekkers
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Your grammatical errors are not actually terribly distracting. The fact that no one in the Torchwood crew seems in character is, though. They sound more like the Scoobies than the people they actually are. Part of the problem is that they sound far too American.
Review By [bekkers] • Date [19 Oct 08] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 2: In Which There is a One-Eyed Gunslinger" from Beth
Review:
Interesting. Me wanna read more of this. Update as soon as you can.
Review By [Beth] • Date [19 Oct 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 2: In Which There is a One-Eyed Gunslinger" from angelkitty
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hahahaha this is so good and i cant wait to read more
Review By [angelkitty] • Date [19 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 1: In Which There is a Big Hole" from CrystalOGrapher
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The premise is interesting, but the grammar errors are distracting enough that I had to force myself to read to the end. Your work would benefit greatly from editing.
Review By [CrystalOGrapher] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1: In Which There is a Big Hole" from snarkmork
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Good writing, nice beginning though I'm a bit disappointed the first chapter was so short.
Is this the other side of the portal Glory opened with Dawn's blood?
Review By [snarkmork] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1: In Which There is a Big Hole" from Caliadragon
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This is a very intersting start and I look forward to seeing what will happen next.


Thanks
Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 1: In Which There is a Big Hole" from julieqt
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Intriguing i like that in a first chapter :)
Review By [julieqt] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1: In Which There is a Big Hole" from AllenPitt
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Poor Xander. What a crew to meet up after he falls through a vortex. On the other hand, maybe he can get a new eye from amongst the artifacts in the Torchwood collection. Will anything else come through with him? A demon, maybe? The T. crowd has met lots of strange stuff....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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