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Review of chapter "Onward Ever Onward" from Arkaedia
Review:
It's great to see this getting updated. And according to Google maps it should take 17 to 18 hours of pure drive time to get from LA to Colorado Springs. So two days is much more likely for a bus ride than ten days. They have many stops to make along the way, but it certainly shouldn't more than triple the amount of time.

Hope to see more soon!
Review By [Arkaedia] • Date [19 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Onward Ever Onward" from norgco
Review:
Good part, brings the storyline along nicely. I like the characterisation.

Um, could we have the next part in less that two and a half years though? This seems to be a story I could seriously get into but that will need several more parts before Buffy has arrived, Major Carter has welcomed her and explained to her team - and us - about her daughter, Bufficus Maximus has shown some interresting skills and maybe a "...by the way Murray, I don't know what species of Demon you are, but if you hurt my mum they, will be finding pieces of you for weeks."

Enjoy it, look forward to more.
Review By [norgco] • Date [19 Mar 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Onward Ever Onward" from DarthPayne
Review:
I'm hoping for more chapters soon.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [19 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Onward Ever Onward" from Melaniemarie
Review:
I like the start. Looking forward to see where you are headed with the story..
Please keep going...
Review By [Melaniemarie] • Date [19 Mar 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Onward Ever Onward" from AllenPitt
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ipod didn't come out until 2001; but that's a minor detail. that & text messaging--people take it for granted now, it's easy to forget how new all that stuff is.
Anyway--wow and she even warns Carter she's arriving? Though if Sam was off planet & doesn't get the msg, it might still be a surprise.
Presumably Sam has no idea of what B's been up to lately? But might have heard some bad things ie the Hemery high school gym getting burned down? Might think she's a delinquent.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [19 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Onward Ever Onward" from serenityselena
Review:
poor Buffy ... it`s not easy being her ...
things will hopefully get better...
can`t wait to read more ^__^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [19 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End" from Gideon
Review:
I hope you come back to this story sometime. I like the mature and prepared Buffy you have here, reminds me of Carter :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [11 Oct 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Evil author = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a good story, so please stop being an evil author.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [12 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End" from FireWolfe
Review:
Love to see an update on this and your other story it been a year and that just way to long.

Lisa
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End" from (Past Donor)Dianasis
Review:
good idea - I'll wait to see where it is going before I say more.
Review By [(Past Donor)Dianasis] • Date [24 Jul 09] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End" from seraphinn
Review:
This is great. Will there be more? Please?
Comments from author:
thanks :) will be more soon just got to proof read it :) thanks for the review
Review By [seraphinn] • Date [17 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End" from immortalsilence
Review:
ok love where your going with this more chapters pretty please
Comments from author:
will update very soon :) thankyou for reviewing
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [19 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End" from Tempe
Review:
Great start! I'm curious to see how Sam's Buffy's real mom and how she ended up with Joyce. Hopefully, this won't be the last we hear of the Scoobies. Update again soon!
Comments from author:
the Scoobies will appear again but not play a huge role in this story, hope you like my explanation in the next chapter! :)
Review By [Tempe] • Date [18 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
Great start! I'm looking forward to reading th rest :)
Comments from author:
thankyou :) the next bit will be here soon
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [17 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End" from spring
Review:
Are you English? The only reason that I ask is because you use a few words that only people from ether England or Australia use in writing that or they are writing Harry Potter crossovers. The words that you wrote that i am talking about are "mum" and "notes" aka mom and dollar bills/bills. Besides those two things I love this fic so far I really love the fact that you have Buffy being very mature about everything and letting everyone know that she is okay and the reasons why she is leaving. I really really hope to read more of this excellent fic again soon (feeding the muse).
Comments from author:
i didn't like how she just left without telling anyone where she went in the series so i didn't let her do that in my fic. i think that for a 17 year old she was really mature in the show so instead of making her imature and annoying i'm trying to carry that on. i'm Australian and i can't really be bothered changing my writing to the American spelling so sorry about that. thank you for feeding my muse (it gets hungry alot!) and i hope you like the next chapter thats coming up :)
Review By [spring] • Date [17 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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