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Jon the Guide

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Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from nemogbr
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Good progress in the story.

I would presume that Jon will be able to persuade the Scoobies to start using modern weapons.
With their new abilities, perhaps Kendra can be saved and you can have a trio of Slayers.

Please update more soon.
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [27 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written chapter, especially the newly formed bond but big extra laughs for Mayborne.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [27 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from lothlorien
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"...unless something stresses the bond, such as one of the pairing being in mortal danger or injured, they won’t snap at the slightest touch or approach.”

From somewhere behind him, Jim heard a softly whispered “Oh dear”, along with the sound of a cloth polishing glasses. Jim wondered what he’d said to fluster the man, but didn’t turn around to inquire."
lol. this got me laughing. i guess no one's ever approaching xander huh... great chapter. please post the next one soon
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [27 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Ansku
Review:
Good chapter :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [27 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Could the Hellmouth EAT Maybourne *please*!!!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [27 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from kayron
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I don't know if this is pre or post initiative, but those three soldiers plus Harry Mayborne spell more bad news for the Scoobies. DUN DUN DUN!! Thanks for the update!
Review By [kayron] • Date [27 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Elleria
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Love this.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [26 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Obsidian
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awesome story. I look forward to continuation.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [17 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Almadynis
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Love this! More coming soon?
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [14 Jul 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from winnie
Review:
Like most fans, I want more yesterday. I am enjoying this story and am looking forward to more when it comes. Thank you.
Review By [winnie] • Date [6 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from mithrilandtj
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Cool. I like it!
Can't wait for more!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [6 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Ansku
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Lovely :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [5 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from (Recent Donor)HiltonK
Review:
woohoo! Love this story always good to have updates.
Looking forward to seeing Jon in Sunnyhell....
Review By [(Recent Donor)HiltonK] • Date [5 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from lothlorien
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love this chapter. it's great. please continue the story soon
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [5 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from minijo
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I like the ritual that has bonded Jon and Xander, can't wait until they go back to Sunnydale. What adventures will await them there I wonder?
Review By [minijo] • Date [5 Jun 09] • Not Rated
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