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Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Albus Exposits" from talonora
Review:
awesome start! you are doing a great job writing the characters and I loved the bit where they tried to stake Snape (I think that is who you implied) I hope you continue to write and I can't wait for it to be updated! :)
Comments from author:
Thanks! Hee, yeah, that was Snape. Can't you just see him coming back and ranting about it, and Albus being like, "I've always said you should try to get a bit more sun," or something... okay, that was funnier in my head. :) Thanks for the review! Updates should comes pretty soon.
Review By [talonora] • Date [31 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Albus Exposits" from Elleria
Review:
Looking forward to the next bit.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Updates should be coming pretty soon.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [24 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Albus Exposits" from sosaith
Review:
This will prove interesting, I think. The funniest thing was the several rapid calculations it took for Angel to count from 1976 to almost a year later. Lol.
Comments from author:
I hope so. And heee. I love Angel, but he's never struck me as someone who's super quick on the uptake, you know? Not that he's stupid, not at all, just... he needs time for the gears to grind. :)

Thanks for the review!
Review By [sosaith] • Date [23 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Albus Exposits" from kayron
Review:
Thanks for the update. It really cleared things up for me. Gotta say though...I don't know who makes the worst parents..Jessica and Tony Harris or Lucious Malfoy and Bellatrix LeStrange! Angel (a.k.a. Deadboy) and Xander are going to make a great couple once the shock clears up! Looking forward to the next update. :o)
Comments from author:
Good, I was hoping it would! And, yeah, Xander's really got bad luck when it comes to parents, doesn't he? At least he's got Draco, or he will, so there's one mostly non-sucky family member. Don't you just love Xangel? I know I do. :)

Thanks for the review! Updates should be coming pretty soon.
Review By [kayron] • Date [23 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Albus Exposits" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Okay... well... good explanation of the magical equivelent of a nervous breakdown, explaining the behaviour. Looking forward to seeing where you take this.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Yeah, Xander's got some issues going on, and the whole evil dad thing isn't going to help, not to mention his actions during the attack, which eventually will be an issue. I'm glad the explanation is more or less reasonable, and thanks for your review!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - A Castle in Ohio" from VillageOrchid
Review:
You'd think that Xander would associate a Castle in Ohio with Dracula's mobile castle? Otherwise, while I don't grok your characterization of Xander the storytelling and dialog is quite good.
Comments from author:
That is a very good point. I figured he would know that it's not Dracula because of Poppy and Dobby and everything, but he surely would have at least thought about the possibility of another mobile castle or something. Thanks for the tip!

I'm glad you like the writing, even if Xander's not quite to your liking. Anything in particular that bugs you about him?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Albus Exposits" from silvergaurd
Review:
Fantastic new chapter, can't wait to see more soon!>
Comments from author:
Thanks! New chapters should be up pretty soon. :)
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [23 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Albus Exposits" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
Wow, Lucius and Bellatrix's son? Xander ought to have some serious magic. I really like this story.
Comments from author:
Yup, he's got quite the legacy. Glad you like it so far. :)
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [23 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Albus Exposits" from RyenSelenityCaliburn
Review:
This is awesome! I love who it's going so far! It's very interesting and draws you in. :)
Looking forward to more good chapters.
Ryen
Comments from author:
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying. The next few chapters should be up soon. :)
Review By [RyenSelenityCaliburn] • Date [23 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - A Castle in Ohio" from kyzhart
Review:
Very intriguing. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying. Hope the new chapter meets expectations!
Review By [kyzhart] • Date [21 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - A Castle in Ohio" from silvergaurd
Review:
Great new chapter, cant wait to see more soon!Q
Comments from author:
Thanks! Hope to have more up within the next few days. :)
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [19 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - A Castle in Ohio" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
Wow, this is a wonderful beginning! I can not wait to see where this goes!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [19 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - A Castle in Ohio" from rothos
Review:
Very good story so far. Interesting how you tied Angel and Albus together in some way; maybe a fleshing out would help?
Comments from author:
Thanks! Yeah, the Angel/Albus backstory will be explained in the next chapter--it's so totally clear in my head I sort of forgot y'all don't live up here and wouldn't be able to read my mind. Thanks for the reminder. :)
Review By [rothos] • Date [18 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - A Castle in Ohio" from Miranda
Review:
ah, xangel is always an interesting combo. I do hope you update this story soon as im interested in seeing how it pans out.
Comments from author:
Isn't it though? There can never be enough Xangel. Thanks for reviewing, and I'll try to get the next chapter up within the next few days.
Review By [Miranda] • Date [18 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - A Castle in Ohio" from Tabee
Review:
so far I'm greatly enjoying this story.

Xander's reactions to waking up at the castle are hilarious.

I hope you have Cordy rant to someone about Dumbledore's clothes, because that would be a riot.

I can't wait to see what all is going to happen, happy writing! Update soon please :)
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it so far! Xander waking up was very fun to write.

I should have another chapter up within the next few days.
Review By [Tabee] • Date [18 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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