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Review of chapter "Adopting a Stray" from Bluejello
Review:
Poor Xander... Apocolypses really don't count as a vacation, no matter where they are.
I'd love to see Buffy and Mercy meet, something tells me they'd have way too much fun picking on Sam.
Comments from author:
Hm... stuff to ponder...
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [3 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Adopting a Stray" from debbie
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nice quips from the scooby gang. Samuel clearly doesn't know what he's getting himself into with this motley crew. He might be wishing for employment with demons to get away from the white hats like Xander too
Comments from author:
The Scooby Gang is made of awesome, aren't they? :)
Review By [debbie] • Date [3 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Adopting a Stray" from Aeryn
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Hope you continue this, would love to see more
Comments from author:
I'll try!
Review By [Aeryn] • Date [3 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Adopting a Stray" from SassyFrass
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Great story so far. And I love that DHoffryn is trying to woo xander into working for him.
Looking forward to more!
Review By [SassyFrass] • Date [3 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Adopting a Stray" from Javian
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Cute - the D'Hoffryn bit. Nice update overall, especially the shift to Xander's perspective.
Comments from author:
I love me some Xander writing perspective. Its ol' hat at this point. :)
Review By [Javian] • Date [3 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Step Sideways" from katimaviklindzy
Review:
Yes, that is something Bran would do, the brat. I really do hope you decide to continue this story, I love it more everytime I read it.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! I'm glad you're continuing to enjoy it!
Review By [katimaviklindzy] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Step Sideways" from (Past Donor)Mari
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The interaction between Dawn and Buffy was very nice, and the explanation about why Samuel was sent made sense; Samuel's dad is that sneaky, and would want him to find a reason to be excited about being alive.
Comments from author:
Isn't Bran a sneak? A wonderful sneak. LOL
Review By [(Past Donor)Mari] • Date [14 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Step Sideways" from kittenpoker
Review:
love it!
Review By [kittenpoker] • Date [13 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Step Sideways" from debbie
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Interesting dynamic between Dawn and Buffy and their realizations about her romantic history. I'd love to see more of this
Review By [debbie] • Date [12 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Step Sideways" from Bluejello
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Dawn versus Sam... I think I'd pay to see that.
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [12 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Step Sideways" from katimaviklindzy
Review:
First of all thanks for continuing this story, with an opening like the first chapter it just made us beg for more!

I think the Buffy Dawn interaction was awesome, especially since they were being so open with each other.

I have to say I do kinda hope that a meeting with Mercy is in the eventual future, I'd think that if they didn't kill each other that they'd get along scarily well... Then of course poor Adam and Sam would be doomed.
Review By [katimaviklindzy] • Date [12 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Step Sideways" from KnightOwl
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I really like this story. I'm a big fan of the Mercy Thompson series and I really like Samuel. It would be nice to see him find someone to love. I loved Dawn's thought of Buffy being smart because it was the truth, I also loved her threat against him. I hope to see more parts in this story.
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [12 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Bad Idea" from katimaviklindzy
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I do believe that leaving things at that could be considered cruel and unusual punishment! Pretty please consider writing more! I just love the Mercy books and I'm excited that I found a section for them here.
Review By [katimaviklindzy] • Date [3 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Bad Idea" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
It stretches a little to think that Samuel, and not Charles, would be sent to assassinate someone, but Samuel's reaction to Buffy was interesting enough to allow me to ignore that tiny OOC moment.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I was kind of going with Samuel was sent to get his mind off of Mercy angle. If I pursue this further, it would get explained, but otherwise, its my OOC time. :)
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [4 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Bad Idea" from VaMpEdChiK
Review:
I absolutly love the Patricia Briggs, Mercy Thompson books, and of course Buffy. lol so thanks. more please!?
-Amber
Comments from author:
It was designed as a one shot, but I might make it a multi-chapter in time. :)
Review By [VaMpEdChiK] • Date [4 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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