I like how you pulled everything together to finish this round off. Xander I know will come back one way or another and when he does the bad guys better look out!! Great story can't wait for the next installment!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks! So not mad that I killed him?
Review By [AonGealach] • Date [14 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I am not flaming you.. but not happy ...cried about Jesse...that was soooooo totally wrong. You could have had a relative show up or older sibling, aunt, uncle or had neighbor type demon who the kid knew and loved willing to go with instead of killing the kid. I have enjoyed your story till this chapter and even liked this chapter till the killing of Jesse. I do look forward to more but I only give this chapter a 1 as no matter how good/great I thought the rest of the chapters(story) has been the death of Jesse ruined it for me. But I do love your story keep up the good work. Thank you for writing. JC
Review By [JayCee] • Date [9 Jul 09] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Good chapter. That sucks about Jesse. Do we want to know what Xander is going to do - not that it matters if we do or not, I'm sure we will. Looking forward to the next.
Comments from author:
Thanks. It sucks but I couldn't figure out what to do with him and I needed a reason for Xander to do some stuff so killing Jesse made the most sense even though it made me sad to do it.
Review By [PsychoWing] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Awesome chapter, really well written. I like how you have integrated your Xander into season four's finale. I was upset about Jesse though. I hope we find out eventually why ADAM would feel it was necessary to kill Jesse. And hopefully one day Xander will get another cub to take care of.
Review By [AonGealach] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Xander may have gone out on his own, but it's good that they can count on him in a crisis. Hopefully Xander talks to Sam soon, because Sam is starting to think that Xander finds him distasteful 'being supernatural'. Sam seems to have forgotten that Xander is 'supernatural' too.
Comments from author:
It's more Sam thinks the fact he was brought back from the dead that Xander finds eww.
Review By [kayron] • Date [20 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]