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Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from kayron
Review:
AWWW DAMN!!
Review By [kayron] • Date [14 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from AonGealach
Review:
I like how you pulled everything together to finish this round off. Xander I know will come back one way or another and when he does the bad guys better look out!! Great story can't wait for the next installment!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks! So not mad that I killed him?
Review By [AonGealach] • Date [14 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from MavenAlysse
Review:
Aww... ::frowning:: you killed off Jesse? ::muttering:: isno' fair. I was starting to really like the little blighter.

I'm enjoying the story thus far (deceased kids notwithstanding) - thank you so much for sharing.

-MavenAlysse
Review By [MavenAlysse] • Date [10 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from JayCee
Review:
I am not flaming you.. but not happy ...cried about Jesse...that was soooooo totally wrong. You could have had a relative show up or older sibling, aunt, uncle or had neighbor type demon who the kid knew and loved willing to go with instead of killing the kid. I have enjoyed your story till this chapter and even liked this chapter till the killing of Jesse. I do look forward to more but I only give this chapter a 1 as no matter how good/great I thought the rest of the chapters(story) has been the death of Jesse ruined it for me. But I do love your story keep up the good work. Thank you for writing. JC
Review By [JayCee] • Date [9 Jul 09] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [8 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from PsychoWing
Review:
Good chapter. That sucks about Jesse. Do we want to know what Xander is going to do - not that it matters if we do or not, I'm sure we will. Looking forward to the next.
Comments from author:
Thanks. It sucks but I couldn't figure out what to do with him and I needed a reason for Xander to do some stuff so killing Jesse made the most sense even though it made me sad to do it.
Review By [PsychoWing] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from kayron
Review:
That kid was Xander's as soon as the name Jesse went past his lips. I can't believe that Xander lost his kid!
Review By [kayron] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from TurquoiseGirl
Review:
Oh, poor Xander and little Jesse.
Review By [TurquoiseGirl] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from (Past Donor)HiltonK
Review:
Ouch. Poor Xan.
Vengence reigns....
Although Sam snuggles would do :0)
Review By [(Past Donor)HiltonK] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from bex
Review:
Oh no Xander's lost two Jesse's?? Bring on the avenging hyena-boy!
Review By [bex] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from AonGealach
Review:
Awesome chapter, really well written. I like how you have integrated your Xander into season four's finale. I was upset about Jesse though. I hope we find out eventually why ADAM would feel it was necessary to kill Jesse. And hopefully one day Xander will get another cub to take care of.
Review By [AonGealach] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from tonisimone
Review:
more More MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Review By [tonisimone] • Date [22 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Elleria
Review:
Update soon please!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [22 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from mithrilandtj
Review:
LOL
Maybe Xan could call Wes & Angel about the kid.

And Xan really needs to get off his ass and TELL SAM.
Comments from author:
Xander willingly call Angel and about a kid? As for Sam, not too much longer
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [20 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from kayron
Review:
Xander may have gone out on his own, but it's good that they can count on him in a crisis. Hopefully Xander talks to Sam soon, because Sam is starting to think that Xander finds him distasteful 'being supernatural'. Sam seems to have forgotten that Xander is 'supernatural' too.
Comments from author:
It's more Sam thinks the fact he was brought back from the dead that Xander finds eww.
Review By [kayron] • Date [20 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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